Ill Remember You

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Author: VictoriaMontez

Title: I'll Remember you

Cover: Your cover is simple and cute, however, if you're really trying to draw in someone's attention, I think it would be best to draw up another one.

(If you are unable of doing one yourself or you're just as lazy as am I ;p I have a really really good friend here who is amazing at them! rubyruins )

If you plan on doing it yourself, I would like to make some suggestions. As a reader looking at this book and the title, the first thing I think the title should give off is maybe a couple facing a sunset, something suggesting that someone is leaving. Another thing I'd suggest is something simple like a shadow in a slum alleyway.

Description: I like the description, very enticing. You should add dates (if you know them) when you had started the book and / or when you completed it at the bottom because overall, it makes the book more sophisticated. (For example, on one of my descriptions, I even have the whole copyright ordeal written out so it gives your book that extra length of looking nice)

Chapter One (only): I remember your book looking familiar and I started reading it and automatically remembered that I had read it on my own when you first published. I reread it and I fell in love with it all over again, I am completely blown away by this book and I love the type of mystery and suspense you put the whole book through, it is a real page turner! I 100% recommend this book to anyone who has not read it for it is one of the best short stories I have read.

Review By : @spoiledthot

Recommendation Level : 10/10
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