I havent updated in AGES!!! I miss it but theres not much to complain about but I thought of a few more so here it is:
111. what is it with fanfic writers and the word orbs? there eyes okay!
112. "he ran his tounge along my bottom lip asking for entrance but I denied access. " sorry access denied, wrong fucking password.
113. "our tounges battled fighting for dominance" im sorry but that sounds painful...
114. apparently no one knows how to knock! I personally would not enjoy random people just drifting in and out of my house.
115. Everyones attracted to the main characer like shes the last female on earth, I mean what happened to the the other 50 odd girls in the club?
116. "He was really mad at me so I put on my booty shorts and crop top and started dancing for him" = I got my boyfriend really mad so I gave him a lap dance. no.
117. "chapter4 -just the starting" thats not how you english.
118. "*DO NOT READ IF YOU ARE UNDER 12* were gonna dress up really sexy and search around for some hot guys" Dear I think your too young to be reading your own story.
119. "we have to go house shopping" kk ill meet you in the apartment eilse.
120. (not my spelling an exact quote) "meet you in my class my caty cat. Fuck you!xx- your secreat fucker" what does that even MEAN!?!
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