I swear these "thug" stories are really getting to me.
1. Everybody had the same name from Khan, to Kaylin, Heme, Jerome, etc.
2. They are seriously lacking originality. It like the story line is the same, Boy meets girl. Girl don't want the thug vice versa then the boy and girl somehow instantly fall in love with each other in a weeks time. Please you guys I get its a story but realistically its ok to speed up the time frame from weeks to months everything does not have to be the next day of following week.
3. If i see BAE one more time I'm going to scream!!!.Don't no grown man call his lady BAE. neither does a "thug" y'all need to research for rea, that is the best way to become a great writer researching.
4. I understand that editing is not really a big deal but please if its hard for me to understand what the next sentence was supposed to be then I'm not reading the story.
5. Every girl don't have to end up pregnant and every "thug" doesn't have to have a babymomma. uggh so tired of these repetitive story lines.
6. Grab the readers attention to make them auctally want to continue to read your story. Its very easy for me to get bored if i feel the story it a typical, predictable thug story.
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