part 1

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The story stars with the same track as it is now.....ie,
om upset with gouri for what happnd at his art exibition.....shivaay misses annika as she have gone to meet saahil.........bhavya reveals the truth that she was 4 years elder than rudy(i desided to go with ruvya....since the story is going with same tracks as in the show)

since the story is going with same tracks as in the show)

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just imagine that tej tejvilana probs are solved..i dont want to write on that crap..😝) NOTE:SWETLANA STILL THERE TRYING HER BEST TO DESTROY OBEROIS

At OM,
shiv:(in phone)....📱ha yaar tume bohot miss kar rahe hai....😉😉aur saahil kaise hai??sab teek ho na??ha....baad mein phone karti hu....bye....apna kyal rakna...phone rakhti hu...
rudy:haye ...haye .....apne hone wale ,ho chuke biwi ki yaad ayi kya....hw cute.....bhaiyya aap hamare sath bhi thoda time spent karogi plz...👿👿😉

dadi:beta annika ki phone dhi kya....?aur saahil kaisa hai??
shiv:dadi voh teek hai aur kal vol dono ate hongi.....
dadi:rab da lakh lakh sukar hai......🙏🙏aur iska matlab kal se shadi ki baaki functions shuru hone vale hai .....haina???
shiv:dadi kal se nahi parso....aur rudy baaki sab log kaha hai......?
rudy:voh mamma papa toh wedding ke preparations mein phase hue hai....aur chote papa toh office gaya hai....phir hamare love couples hai na voh apni kamre mein honge....aajkal o kuch jyada romantic hogya hai😉😉😂😂😈😈😈
SHUT UP RUDY!!!!(om aagya....😎)
om:koi gouri ko dhekha kya....??voh toh apni kamre mein bhi nahi hai...
shiv:voh kaha jayegi.....yahi kahi hogi...tu tension mat lo....
om:mujhe kyu tension....voh...to...basss....
shiv:jaise om....i know ...that u guys having many problems ......still kal exibition mein jo kuch bhi hua ...voh sab ki zimmedaar mein hoon ....mein ne gouri se kaha vaha jane keliye......aur....
om:shivaay...thats fine...actually i couldnt controll myself when i saw those media people making fun of her...i knew all these would happen if i take her there.....iseliye mein use nahi lejana chahta dha....🙁
shiv:om u know ri8 ki she havnt got good education......aur voh uski galti nahi hai....socho om ...kitna bura laga hoga gouri ko ...kal tum usse bahut nazar hokar batein karti dhi...u were behaving so rude to her....😒
om:janta hai shivaay par mein kya karuu....i have to talk to her....have to apologise to her...

On the other side gouri desided to leave OM ....thinking that she dont deserve om and she cannot make him happy .....😣😣so she desided to go back to barreilly....she packed her bags and left to railway station....

om started searching for gouri in OM....(are om she left from there....jaake doondo use....😂😂)
He entered the room searching for her....he couldnt find her....but he found something else........on the table....(yes its lettr😂)it was a letter and her mangal sutra was kept at its top(dont know wethr she had it or not still imagine...)om was hell shoked reading the lettr.....👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇👇

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omkara ji,
    ham jate hai ....ham aapko aur pareshan nahi karegi...aap tension mat lena ham barreilly jate hai apni ma ke paas.aur kabhi vaapas nahi aayegi aapki jindagi mein.yaad hai jab pichle baar mein ghar chodkar jaane wale dhe....tab aap hame jane nahi diya aur dekho ab kaisa raita phail gaya hai...mujhe ye samajhna chahiye dha ki ham aapki layak hain nahi...phir bhi mein yaha rehne ki phaisla li ...ye sochkar ki aap aaj ya kal hame apni patni ki darja degi.par ham galat dhe.mein toh ek unpad aur desi chirayya hai....aur aap .....ham kabhi ek nahi hongi....isliye mein ja raha hoon....aap khush rehna ......

                                      gauri

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m pov
yeh eise kaise kar sakte hai.....manta hun ki mene galti ki....par  itni badi saza..gouri eise kaise ja sakti hai....do u think that i ill let to go away from me....no....gouri....ill not...

He also notice that not ever her single dress was left in the cupboard (nothing was left exept the lettr nd mangalsutra)

om runs with the letter to shivaay......

meanwhile ....
rudy pov..
bhavya mujhse chaar saal bade....???toh kya hua.mein usse bohot pyar karti hu.aap hame bahu kuch sikhaya hai...kal mujhe samajh mein aaya ki paise kya cheez hai aur ye bhi ki,use kamana utna aasan nahi hai.......agar aap hamare liye itna kuch kar sakte hai toh ham bhi aapkeliye kuch kar sakte hai.....dekha bhavya jaise tumne mujhe ek task di vaise mein bhi ek task deti hu tujhe.....within 1 month ill make u realise that age is not a big deal between us and u ill come to me.....ye mera vada hai ....khud se.....

bhavya pov
mujhe janta hai rudy ki tum hamse bahut pyar karte hai lekin .....
mein apni jindagi mein bahut kuch khoya hai....apni maa..paa....aur meri choti behen ....all these happend only because i was a cop....and i had enimity with sulthan....so i dont wanna put a whole family who loves me lot ...into danger.....sirf isiliye mein aapse door rehti hu...mujhe jaanta hai ki age is not a big deal between us....but its only a stupid reason for me to stay away from u.....

will gouri come back to om??when will annika come to om with sahil....will rudy be able to compleate his task which he have to himself....??will....willl....willll......???
keep reading ...


so.....its done friends....let me remind u that it will take few chapter to get into vanwas track.....so keep reading and please.... please ...please ....do share ur views about this story (comment it .....even the negetives so that i can clear ma mistakes and make itall positive😊)...and please do vote if u r satisfied with the chappy...🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Now..........i didnt even expect 20+viewers(😂honestly😂)and i got more than 45 viewers and even likes for my first chappy itself...😀😀its a very big thing for me!!!and so i was hell exited updating this chappy.......
thanks to all the readers....and need ur support through the story ...till its end.....
LUBNA SHAFI

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