"NO!" Marcel bawled, strident shrieks penetrating the air. The spell was meant to force him and Ariel together forever! She wasn't meant to use the dagger to end her life. Yet Ariel hadn't ended herself. She united with sea. A tender tickle scraped his scrunched up toes and in a matter of seconds, Marcel dissolved into sea-foam.
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"Girls, don't cry," king Triton huddled all his daughters into a fierce hug. "Don't you see? We didn't lose Ariel, she's all around us. Every wave you feel is Ariel and your mother, every bubble, every water particle. She's everywhere. She's at peace, experienced a life of adventure and returned back home," His intelligent words of wisdom caused them to relax, fond smiles lighting their faces.
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CREDITS:
*Google images, for the multimedia at the side and providing material to make the story cover.
*Pic monkey, editing site used to make cover, try it👍
*Hans Christian Anderson, for writing the original of the little mermaid, therefore giving me something to work with. If you search the original, you'll see that although I put quit different twists and tweaked the plot, the base/core is the same.
*Disney, for making the story popular and intriguing me to search the original. Also for giving me characters to use.
*Watt pad, for giving me something to write it on and inspiring me to write.
This story took a couple of months to write, rather long for me as I write quickly usually. I did lose interest a couple of times and rushed a few parts, but I'm content with the result. Please enjoy, comment your views, vote to reward me for my efforts and spread if you find it worthy of sharing with others xoxo
~TheBimbo
-Author to reader questions-
Who did you prefer, marcel or the prince? Were you happy with the ending? Did you like the book? Comment your replies, i'd love to know what you guys are thinking and what thinking when reading!
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