Steven Universe OC Reviews

Green Diamond

Today I will be reviewing Green Diamond from @StellaNalu123 let's get started!

Name: Green Diamond
Gem Type: Diamond
Age: 100 Years Old
Gender: Sexless(uses female pronouns)
Homeplanet: Homeworld
Planet currently on: Earth
Sexual Orientation: (i dunno what that means :[)
For the future if you ever need to know, it means what gender they prefer to be romantic with, or what sexuality they are. For example straight (girl and guy), gay (guy and guy or girl and girl) etcetera.

Personality: She tries to be cheerful and kind at all times, but tends to be quite rude and gets annoyed easily. She also suffers from PTSD.
It's interesting for a gem OC to have PTSD, I like where this is going so far.

Likes: Hanging out, having friends, when her powers are under control
Dislikes: Having a lack of control over her powers, her fellow diamonds, losing a fight, and the dark.
Strengths: Gem is very hard to reach(it's on her tounge), incredibly durable due to being a diamond, fast on her feet(she's a off-color; she's pearl sized) expert on fighting, and has a insane amount of powers
Weaknesses: Can only control 3 of her powers(And even they are hard to control), if corrupted for too long or due to losing self control, Green could die or by stuck corrupted for months at times, underestimates her enemies and overestimates her limits, not very smart when it comes to strategizing or anything that requires serious thinking
Very detailed strengths and weaknesses!

Best Friends: Lapis and Peridot
Lover: No one

Backstory: Green Diamond was made to replace Pink Diamond. However, her height was stunted due to a defet in her gem. Yellow Diamond was furious when she saw Green, and sent her away to be experimented on. After 10 years of guesome torture, Green escaped from the lab and fled to Earth, scarred and affected forever. She managed to find the Crystal Gems, who are helping her slowly recover from PTSD and controlling her powers

I like the idea of an off color diamond! Although it is a tad strange for her to be experimented on, but I suppose it would make sense since the diamonds wouldn't want any other off colors to happen. It also makes sense that she can't control her powers since she's so small.

Appearance: (will send link)
Weight: 20 pounds
Height: Pearl's height
Gem Placement: Tongue

Very light, but I'll look past it since she is a gem, and they don't exactly need to have human proportions.

Job: Was intended to be a ruling Diamond.
Boss: No one
Co-Workers: Intended to be Yellow, Blue and White Diamond.

Overall I do like the idea of this character. And off color diamond is interesting, and it makes sense that the diamonds would try to replace Pink. I'd suggest shortening the amount of time she was experimented on though. She can still get PTSD from it, but it would make more sense for the diamonds to experiment on her for a short amount of time to simply try and figure out what went wrong. The strengths and weaknesses make sense, although make sure that you say how she becomes corrupted and un-corrupted, since you mentioned that very briefly. In short the backstory could use a little more detail along with the personality, but you have a goof thing going here.

My grade for this OC is a solid 7/10. Make sure to add more detail in some places to make the character seem more fleshed out, and consider my other suggestions as well, although you do not have to.