Voldermort is Gone Tom Riddle is Here

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So, this is the end of the first book. I hope you liked it!!! I know I sort of ended it on a cliff hanger, sorry bout that. But for good reason!! I promise!!

If there is something you would like me to incorperate into my second story, tell me. I am up for suggestions. Honestly, please tell me. The more Ideas I have the better the book will be, so tell me. really. Anything-bar Tom or Draco cheating on each other-is permitted.

AND FYI-I really love suggestions, they are not only helpful, but help me know that you are thinking about what you would like to happen in the second book, and will also help me know what you want.

You have until next monday to get all the suggestions, questions, or comments in! Because as of Next Monday I shall be started the sequel to this book.

Here was what I was looking to do when I started the story

Get you to feel sorry for DracoGet you to like Tom RiddleMake you hate LuciusMake you like Tom and Draco more than the Golden TrioGet an emotional attachement to Draco/Tom/Snape-one of the treeIntroduce Tom as his own character, and not just as the young Voldermortintroduce Tom and Draco's dominant/submissive but not quite relationshipShow Draco's obedient/nervous/insecure/shy side

DID I DO IT?? I don't know you tell me what I succeeded in and what I did not, hopefully I did it all!! But probably not, I mean, let's be realistic here. Anyways, comment and tell me so I know what I have to do before I get into the juicy part of the sequel. Any question you have-TELL ME! So that I can either

1) Answer them personally.

or

2) Answer them within the 2nd book.

Also, I would like to know either how I failed in any of the aforemention bullets, or how I suceeded, so I know a kind of baseline for what I need/don't need to do or what I need to continue doing in the second book. so...PLEASE ANSWER!! Otherwise I shall start the second book, and you will probably get mad because I did something wrong. And Comment anyways, please, I love looking on Quotev and realizing "Hey, I got a notification on Quotev for my story, lovely, this is amazing!!"

Okay, so basically, now you know that Draco and Tom are soul-mates. You also know that Draco may or may not be a Veela, and Riddle may or may not be a Dragon, or Fairy, or maybe a Veela himself. And the Golden Trio think that the whole thing is a Sham, except Ron who still has his doubts. Harry is very convincing people.

So, this was the first part, which focused more on introducing Tom, getting sympathy for Draco, and for Riddle, bashing Lucius a bit, setting up Tom's agenda, and Draco's trust of Tom, and his Loyalty. And also getting the Golden Trio to be a bit suspicious, perhaps nervous, or wary, and kind of introducing basically the build up for the next book, which I shall be starting early next week, by the way, so keep a watch out for that.

The next book will focus on Draco-specifically. You noticed, I will bet, how sometimes I would change from Draco, to Harry and Ron and Hermione, and sometimes to Tom and sort of their thoughts and such. I don't much like POV because, well for one it is ackaward for me to write, and also a bit difficult because I keep switching, and it's annoying to have to go all the way through all over again, so I just don't do it. Maybe if someone specifically asked for it, I would put a chapter in someone's specific point of view.
Anyways, the next book will be specifically from Slytherin's view. Whether that Slytherin is Draco, or Tom, or Blaise, or Pansy, or Crabbe, Goyle, Lucius, even Snape, it doesn't really matter. I will be trying to stay close to a more Slytherin plot line, getting more emotional ties to the Slytherins, instead of specifically Draco and Tom-despite the fact that they are the main characters.

Int the next book also, it starts with Draco and Tom on Platform 9 3/4. And it will also be really focusing on Hogwarts itself, though, perhaps not the lessons much-except for Defense Against the Dark Arts, and Potions.,

Also, LUPIN'S BACK! Lupin was actually one of the only Gryffindors I liked, even though I am still pissed off that we didn't get to figure out what Draco's boggart was. But he was perceptive, and a good teacher, and I really liked him, personally, so he's coming back.

Anyways, the title of the second book is, get ready for it...

Tom Riddle is Here-Hogwarts-Slytherin's side

I will not be introducing a Gryffindors side unless specifically asked, by more than one person. Two, okay I will work with that. The more people as for a Slytherin side to this second book, the more detailed it will be. So, there you are.

Anyways, hope you liked it.

Have fun.

I shall hope to hear from all of you soon.