Thunderbirds are go. (Complete)

the problem

Alan's pov.

My girlfriend is coming over today. I just hope that everyone is nice to her.
"Hey guys?" I ask as I scratch my neck. Everyone turns to look at me. "I just want to say that my girlfriend is coming over today so no pranks plz and plz be nice to her. Just try. Plz for me." I say. "No pranks." I repeat,"*gordon*" I 'coughed'. Then I turned and went out the door.

"Ok so this is the pool." I say as I show kayo around.
"Cool." She breathed. "Can we go in?"
"Sure." I said,"just us or my Bros as well?"

Your pov earlier on.

"Hey guys. So this is kayo." Alan announced to us.
Standing next to him was a girl. She was tall, had skin the colour of melted chocolate and looked really pretty but unfortunately stood like she knew it and was ready to argue otherwise.
"Hi. I'm (y/n)." You say.
"Hi I'm kayo." She said politely.
Well she seems nice.
"Do u want to come have a talk in my room for a while. We should probably get to know each other." You suggest.
"Is she that girl?" You hear her ask Alan.
"Ummmm well yeh." You see Alan awnser while nervously scratching his neck.
Then she put on a really sweet voice. So sweet that it was sickly."oh ok. Well yeh then. I'd love to." She emphasizes the love part and it makes you uncomfortable.
"Right this way then." You say and lead her to your room.

"So this is your room?" She asked you. "A bit too tacky for me. Sorry." She said surveying the room.
"Well straight to the point. Alan is mine." She emphasized. Then she proceeded to kick you in the shin and push you to the floor. "Huh. Alan said you were tough. Such a disappointment. Don't tell anyone or you'll get it here." Then she clicked her neck. And walked out.

Alan's pov sill earlier

"Alan!" I hear as I look up to see Kayo running in clutching her stomach and looking in pain.
"Oh my God Kayo. What Happened?" I say worried.
"That girl." She spat the word out."that girl kicked me in the stomach and told me to get lost!"
She now had tears in her eyes. I was  fuming. How dare (y/n) kick her in the stomach and hurt her. I was gonna make sure she regretted it later.

Readers note

Ok folks only 2 more chapters till the end of book one! Still need suggestions on (y/n).
Anyway hope u are liking the book and it's not 2 cringy.

Untill next time.

Thunderbird Abbey is go!
KABOOM!!!