A Night At Freddy's (Original Fanfic)

Jack Is Now Missing!

I thought I heard evil laughter somewhere in the hallway.
"This place gives me the creeps! Can we go home," I asked with a scared voice.
"Shh! Now that we're out of the office we must be careful! We don't want to attract any unwanted attention to ourselves," Drew said.
"Right!
Can we find Claire and the others," I asked, still nervous.
"That's just what we're doing," James proclaimed.
"How do we know where to look?"
"We won't let any stone go unturned! Even if it'll take all night; we'll look everywhere; in every room," Drew said.
We walked faster down the hall.
Drew opened the door to the storage room.
"AAAHHH!"
Freddy was in the room. It walked closer to us.
"Oh no, you don't," Drew shouted in a protective manner.
"I don't what," Freddy asked in his robotic voice.
"IT TALKS," I shouted confused.
"Shut-up, please," Brandon shouted back at me.
I hid behind Drew out of fear as my body shook uncontrollably as my heart begin to pound. I started to feel light headed; like I was starting to feel sick. Freddy took James and ran off with while holding a tight grip on his wrist.
"DREW!"
"JAMES!"
"DREW, I CAN'T RUN!"
"JAMES, I'm coming!"
Freddy took him to a room nearby, and closed the door.
Drew and Brandon ran after him. Drew tried opening the door, but it wouldn't budge.
"It's locked!"
"Help me bust it open!"
"Uhhh, Drew," I asked in a concerned way.
"Not now, Jennifer! It can wait!"
"It probably can, but I don't think it will!"
A small version of Foxy the Priate came running down the hallway.
"IT'S GOT JACK!"
"It's me!"
"AAAHHHHHHH!"
"Jennifer; what did I say about the screaming?"
"I'm sorry! I can't help myself!"
"Okay, on three," Brandon said; referring to the door.
"HEY GUYS; YOU MIGHT WANT TO HELP ME," Jack shouted.
"I will!"
"Thank-you Jennifer!"
Ballon Boy jump scared me in the hall as the small animatronic fox; ran off with Jack.