The Forgotten Girl written by Silly_Smol_Bean
Your book description is really good! It instantly captivated me. The cover is simple and really cute. In the beginning I have to admit I was very confused with who was talking. It kept saying "she" instead of a name. I would suggest switching that out with her name to make it a little less confusing.
Right when you introduced her and Fred together I was so excited! I instantly pictured Peeves part two. Yet even more destructive. I think all other readers would be instantly captivated by her struggles with being completely forgotten by her family and friends. Each chapter makes me even more captivated to keep reading. I wish you good luck with your book and hope this helped!
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