Loyalties by @mettastars
You are doing a fantastic job with this story! I have read numerous fanfics about the famous Death Eaters' Hogwarts years, but you have pulled this one together in such a way that it is so different from the others.
I have to say, I am impressed and slightly envious of your HP knowledge. You have captured Barty Crouch, Jr. very well in this fanfic! I like his thoughts and how he is determined to show everyone he isn't like his father. I love how you've made Regulus out to be this perfect son and Sirius the sassiest sass master ever wow. I just love it when authors make Sirius a giant sass pile.
(Wait for it...)
I siriusly love Sirius.
Um... okay back to the review now...
AND DONT GET ME STARTED ON SNAPE.
Ugh, I literally despise Severus Snape (and I'm still upset Harry didn't name his son Albus Scarfy Potter...), but you've written him as totally relatable.
I didn't know I had this much in common with young Severus. His friend-zone position is spot on with what happened in the books! I feel like I am Severus Snape (*cringes* WHY!?).
I think this could be a great prequel to the HP series, and I love it! I can't wait for future updates...
Siriusly.
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