Opossum update #2

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Okie dokie my friends! I know you love this story.. I have been thinking about how to make it even better. It takes a lot to make sure everyone is happy and that I don't lose people's interest along the way. Keep it going, unexpected but not all over the place. This is quickly becoming the top story on my list.

With that being said last night I had an awesome idea.. It just came to me.. What if we could see Grievous as his former self? Like you as a reader have an experience with this form of him! I'm not going to give away anymore details or it would ruin the fun. But think about that.

I'm going to draw up several designs of his body the way I would want him to be. I know kaleesh to some can be not the prettiest. I want to take some key notes of there anatomy then add some of what I would have wanted to see. Strong muscles, long dread like scales. The jaw horns, the pointed ears, and his golden cat eyes..

So leave your comments below.
Let me know what you think on this idea.
I am not one to make a story like others I want to stand out.  So you tell me.

Qymaen jai Sheelal 
Warrior of dreams.

Here is some very close pictures of what I want him to look like

Here is some very close pictures of what I want him to look like

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This is just an idea but this is very close. Maybe a bit more aqua and built. Just saying... Cough cough..

This is a clay model. It is amazing detailed. But a few things I do not like. The hair line, hair and the boney cheeks. The ape like nose seems to fit to me. He doesn't need human nose. The ears and the horns on his chin are perfect. I don't want the bottom teeth coming up. I prefer large top canines on my creatures instead.

Just gives you Ideas on how I'm thinking about this

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Just gives you Ideas on how I'm thinking about this. Last but not least is my artwork of grievous I did earlier this year. So you can see I'm up to the challenge. I would only do an outline though for now as I don't have much time to spare on a piece at the moment.

I hope everyone is on board with this

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I hope everyone is on board with this.. I love the idea.. I think you will too. He wouldn't be permanent in this form.. Think of it like your dreams kinda.. Kinda..

Either way..

There we go!
Love
-AO

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