Warrior Cats OC Rater

Brambletail

This the cat that's I'll be reviewing I saw Brambletail by @BlizzyKitty12

I'm also very sorry about the long wait

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Name: Brambletail (May change)

I don't know why, but I enjoy that name! It's simple, but I enjoy it for some reason

Age: 16 moons

Alright

Rank: Deputy (Read backstory for more info)

At first, I didn't understand why a cat so young would be deputy. However, the description bpdoes a rather good job explaining.

Clan: Thunderclan

I have no idea why, but I love to see ThunderClan cats. Many of the OCs that I've see are from different clans, so it's nice to see ThunderClan cats being made by people.

Gender: Tom

Okay

Personality: Brambletail loves going into battles, sometimes even too much, and becomes savage. He is very honest and likes to think of others before himself and he has great faith in Starclan. He tends to ignore the truth and insults just slide down his back. When he gets hurt, however, he always wants revenge.

 Appearance: Dark brown tabby (mackerel) with a stocky physique, big paws for sneaking, medium length fur and pale green eyes.

I love this vivid description ^_^

Kin: Doveheart;mother(deceased), Birchstar;father(alive), Robinkit;brother(deceased) and Beechkit;sister(deceased).

I would love to see what Doveheart and Birchstar's appearances are

Mate: (None)

Alright

Backstory: Brambletail was very young when his two other siblings, Beechkit and Robinkit died. Beechkit was a pale ginger she-cat with blue eyes, born bling and deaf. She died a few sunrises after birth, while Robinkit ventured out of camp and was killed by a fox when he was 3 moons old. After their deaths, Brambletail vowed he would protect his loved ones, no matter how high the cost. His father, deputy at the time, adored his son for keeping strong, and covered him above all other clan cats. Soon after he became leader however, Doveheart died of Greencough. Grieve driven, Brambletail worked hard as an apprentice, hunting and fighting, he was soon the strongest apprentice there, soon after he became a warrior, Briartail (the clan's deputy) died, and Birchstar quickly replaced her with his son. Many were outraged, thinking a cat so young couldn't possibly be a deputy. He was hated by most clan cats for a few moons, but finally warmed up to a few of them, making some very close friends. Soon, two cats came, both harboring feeling for him, yet one was burdened by a dark force trying to take control. (Read my latest fanfic [which will come out soon, btw] to find out :33)

How exactly did Beechkit die? Was it because of severe complications or something else? I also enjoy how there is a reason for Brambletail being deputy thought so young, his father loving him. I love how Brambletail also trains hard because of his grief. However, why would most of the clan dislike him because he had been chosen to be deputy's at an early age?

Mentor: None

Who had been his past mentor? I would love to know who it had been

Apprentice: None

Like the mentor section, did he have an apprentice in the past? If so, who

With this being said, I'd give this cat a 13 out of 15. I enjoyed this cat, but there isn't more that I'd like to know. Thank you for submitting your character and have a wonderful day.