Monkey D. Luffy the Child Whisperer

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So I am going to do something different, a reviewer (LightningBlade49) mentioned that I should add more characters to this story instead of using the Strawhats all the time (eventually Jinbei will be here more often because we already know he is going to join) I thought that maybe Law would be the more focal point of this story as in he is the one finding out Luffy's 'ability' as the Strawhats already know of it.

OOOO- This is a bit different in the Punk Hazard Arc but if I wanted this to fit in the story so hopefully it's okay to go along with it ;) -OOOO

Should I add more characters? And if yes, tell me who I should write about with Luffy, and eventually when I open request again you can request a character to be in the story if you would like that.

Review(s):

LightingBlade49: 'maybe as I change up you can have Luffy apply his skills around others and not just his crew like his fellow supernovas or even events that are happen in canon alot of the skill he's shown could be applied in a comedic/serious way.'

Well I am going to try right now ;P

Sakinhanta: 'Ok that was weird but fun ;) A little hard to imagine Brook disguised as a female too but oh well...

Oh, and Happy New Year!'

Well I am a bit weird haha, though I am glad it was enjoyable to read :3

Tanithlipsky: 'cool'

Thank you!

Icekat-Druid (even though this was PMed) 'To start off, that was great! And for some reason I thought dancing already had a chapter XD lol. Also if I were a Strawhat pirate, I would be awfully suspicious of those prizes lol. Like seriously those prizes are too perfect, I'd be like "guys this has to be a trap." Although I doubt it'd make a difference as I'm sure Luffy would participate regardless. Anyway, Thank you for yet another great chapter and can't wait for the next!'

Even though I already wrote to you, I just had to say thanks again for the kind words and always being a dedicated reader to me. T^T

Alright, that was all for last chapter reviews, sorry for the wait but this is for Phatpanda55 and LeilaDAsce pm with the story!


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After defeating Caesar Clown and restraining him, the Strawhats were able to help transfer the 'Guinea Pig' children, Mocha, Sind, Doran, Ally, Konbu, Uzu, Biyo, and Ginko to the marines so they can be helped.

Though before the kids were able to go, they stuck with the Strawhat crew, including Law for a bit.

The crew was getting patched up by Chopper to make sure nothing horrible has happened to their bodies with the help of Law since of course he is medically trained and was a big help on checking the kids.

Zoro is the first one done with his check-up, he was watching the 8 kids as they were waiting for the marines to pick them up. What the Strawhats noticed from their encounter with the children is that they are all timid and only dangerous when they were lacking the drugs that Caesar gave them.

It was a bit hard at times to calm them down since they did not want to use the drug, have the drug, nor even know how they would even administer it to help calm them down if they had it.

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