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PHOENIX WARS: WRITER'S AWARD 2018 - WAVE 2 Round 1
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MISCELLANEOUS
A Court of Hope and Legacy - Annalisa_Coppolino Judge: -flowerfairies • Very nice selection of words. Have a few grammar mistakes, but they're hardly noticeable.
Aim To Please - xDRAG0N0VAx Judge: -flowerfairies • I'm a bit lost sometimes because I don't know Fallout before, but I can follow the storyline just fine.
Creative Writing - AylaAntoni Judge: -flowerfairies • A few typos are still present. Please remember to edit the chapters and check for typos. • I really love these stories. Unique, and made me really intrigued. Love them!
Dear Diary - marialoveswednesdays Judge: -flowerfairies • It's a bit confusing to read because of the huge paragraphs. • I spotted typos. Be sure to check on the chapters before publishing them.
Fang's Angel Girl - Tokyo_Bound_19 Judge: -flowerfairies • There was small noticeable mistakes you should check on. Remember to edit the chapters before publishing them.
Haunted - bluntpencils Judge: Attti123 The story is interesting and also the use of grammer is nearly perfect. I really enjoyed reading it.
I Dated An Alien: The Inter-Galactic Shipping Reports - CynkNapp Judge: Attti123 There are alot of grammatical mistakes that needs to be corrected. Also the writing style is very confusing
In Between Dreams Book 1: Remnant - Jason_Tenjiro Judge: Attti123 Overall the book is good enough. The idea is unique but you need to work on your writing style.
