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Armathenia by Thorgirl1 JUDGE: RafiaZ It's well written and the description she has given is very good. But some chapters were too short I think one should maintain a standard.
Dreams: A Love Story Which Never Happened - MAckMalice JUDGE: anonymous The idea is pretty much unique but the execution of that idea needs improvement. Writing Style is slightly confusing but it gets better as the chapters go on.
My Life as a Slave After Being an Arabic Princess - arabic_writter JUDGE: RafiaZ Your plot seemed pretty good but you really should reread and edit your chapters thoroughly before you upload them. There are no pauses between sentences and people don't usually continue when there are so many mistakes just in the first chapter.
Ridden-Off Innocence - Cray-CrayReading JUDGE: anonymous Noticeable grammatical and punctuation errors. Crosses over the line of both originality and similarities. Characters doesn't leave that much impression but not that bad either.
Scales - flyingunicornz_ JUDGE: @nekochiiii The writing is good and so as the plot. Good start. It captured my interest... especially the first part where it had a bit of a thrill.
Sixth Sense by Mind_Power JUDGE: RafiaZ The story you've written is good but you really need to pay attention towards the tense you're using. Also you need to improve your writing style. But overall it was a nice book and I enjoyed it. You've describe some of the action scenes very well.
The Dragons of Russia by xDRAG0N0VAx JUDGE: RafiaZ This novel was amazing and I did not find a single weak point. The plot is very different and very well written. Description, vocabulary everything was pretty good.
The Foreigners in The East by mYu514 JUDGE: RafiaZ It was truly a great novel, and the way she has written is extremely good. The vocabulary was good too. I felt like I was reading a novel by a professional author.
