Alyson, Seriously? Two Marysue Points Added. I bet she hates her name, every cliche character hates their name, if I were her I'd hate everything about myself. And her nicknames mostly have nothing to do with her actual name, so cliche. I would also like to comment on her last name, Smith. So original! And definitely not a cliche white girl name. Nothing wrong with white characters but if you have her drinking pumpkin spice lattes at Starbucks in a messy bun I'm going to scream. Try writing about a black character or a Japanese character or a Latina character, the list goes on. And if you are going to try to write a character of a different race do your research and don't use stereotypes.
Thats Not Natural, it's dyed. One Marysue Point Added.
That's Just Scary. Why Are Her Eyes Like That? Three Marysue Points Added.
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A Book Of The Worst OCs Ever
RandomWhat is an OC? Lets check Urban Dictionary: OC Stands for "original character." A character created by a fanfic author or roleplayer. Said created character does not belong to the canon cast but is inserted anyway for entertainment. And sometimes t...