Little Yumi

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I would like to say that the names at the top did NOT create this OC, this is supposed to be Doki Doki Literature Club but with OCs instead of Yuri, Sayori, Natsuki and Monika

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I would like to say that the names at the top did NOT create this OC, this is supposed to be Doki Doki Literature Club but with OCs instead of Yuri, Sayori, Natsuki and Monika.  I found Sayori, Natsuki and Yuri well thought out and with some induviduality that didn't stray too far from the original version, it was easy to believe that they would do as Sayori, Yuri and Natsuki did in the game.  This is the Monika OC, whom I hate.  I can't really even see what she looks like and this is clearly not the DDLC style color scheme.  You can't see much of her and the bloody one on the right doesn't fit the game.  Three Wrong Fandom Points added.

  Three Wrong Fandom Points added

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Wait.  What kind of a name is Little Yumi?  It's not even close to what any Doki Doki Literature Club character would be called.  Two Wrong Fandom Points added.

Half of those aren't even personality traits!  Nerdy, worried about her looks, shy?!?  Five Cliche Points added.  

If.  You.  Can't.  Draw.  Your.  Oc's.  Outfit.  On.  A.  Base.  Then.  Use.  A.  Different.  Base.  And if there are bases for your fandom, USE THEM!  Even my shitty art skills can use a base, here's an example of Natsuki (I know that's not what she wears in that scene but I'm trying to prove a point):

  And if there are bases for your fandom, USE THEM!  Even my shitty art skills can use a base, here's an example of Natsuki (I know that's not what she wears in that scene but I'm trying to prove a point):

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See?  (Base by Firewolfgoddess on DeviantArt, shitty scribbling by me)

Monika, Natsuki, Yuri and Sayori aren't even in this!  Also, she's supposed to be Monika so you said she's friends with herself.

Why do I think she knows nothing about DDLC and just googled things about it, Monika is not suicidal (three edginess points added) and will not like technology.  And Sayori is the one who likes sweets.  One Lack Of Common Sense Point Added.

Monika is the social and outgoing popular girl,  also, she's the reason her friends are dying, and she knows that

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Monika is the social and outgoing popular girl,  also, she's the reason her friends are dying, and she knows that.  Five Lack Of Common Sense Points added.

No, shit Sherlock!  She's Monika for Cats' sake!  One of her most important details is that she knows it's fake!  Two Mary Is So Done By Now You Might Want To Make Sure She Doesn't Hang Herself Like Sayori Or Stab Herself Like Yuri.

Total:

Edginess Points:  3

MarySue Points:  0

Cliche Points:  5

Lack Of Common Sense Points:  6

Wrong Fandom Points:  11

Mary Is So Triggered She Has To Make Up New Points Points:  2

Bye for now!  Be sure to comment and vote, I update every Monday!  

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