After re-reading this, I've noticed that there are a few cheesy/clichéd parts here and there. I also think the ending was a bit rushed if I'm honest.
So I'm taking some time here and there when I can to rewrite some parts and hopefully make it better.
This was my first story but I hope you enjoy it anyway (even the cheesy parts!)
E.H xx
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On The Run With James Dean [UNDER RECONSTRUCTION]
Teen Fiction[Book 1 in the Carter brothers Series] Marie Drayton was your average 18 year old. She had a far too laid back father and a best friend, Jess, whom she is convinced she'll have to save from a stalker one day. Everything was normal. Then the Carter...