my boy tommo:D(a louis tomlinson fan fic.

its a date

kk, so heyy guuuuys:) so i wrote out all the chapters i wanna do and my ideas, and its gunna be goooood! so stay like tuned in and read!!!! and ummmm, yeah so ill start the story now. oh and p.s. if they cuss in the story sorry, if that offfends you or anything. and this IS fiction, so be cool bro. be cool:)thanx

harrys pov:)

a date? huh. okay i can do this.

"hey, ummm what movie?"i held up saw, and piranha.

"mmmmm. piranha. and can you get me a red bull from the firdge?im dying of thirst!"she asked me. so i walked in the kitchen and grabbed two red bulls, and some ice cream for both of us. chocolate of course. i went back in the living room about ten minutes later, and she was on the couch sitting down. she had on short shorts. like daisy duke shorts. she had a tank top on, and her hair was up. ATTRACTIVE.

"you alright harry?"

"huh?oh yeah, im fine.thanx heres your stuff."i handed her her food and drink and she hit play. half the movie we didnt even talk. she kept yelling ewwww! but it was cute. her legs were crossed over mine, and she looked comfy. so i let her keep them there. its not like shes dating louis or anything.

(P.S. AUTHORS NOTE. REST OF THE STORY WILL BASICALLY BE A CONVO.:))

i turned to face her.and she sat cross legged.

"so.....whats up with you and louis?are you dating.....or what?"i asked

"im not sure. i knew this would happen."

"what would happen?"

"i thought, that if i came all of you would like fall in love with me.  then id have to leave.and i dont want to."

"ash.....its okay. your not going to leave.....so you wanna date louis?"

"kind of....im not sure.i like him, but zayns my best friend and i dont wanna lose him over louis."

"your not going to lose zayn.maybe i could talk to him. you know....about louis. since you like him and all."i lowered my head. i hate being jealous of louis. he called dibs, and i know they like eachother. i got off the couch and pulled her with me. i took her upstairs to the balcony. it was a little chilly, but warm still. we leaned against the rail and she shivered.

"you cold?"i started taking off my shirt.

"im fine."she said. then she just stared at me. i had my shirt offf and handed it to her.

"here. hands up."she put her hands above her head and i slid my purple jack wills shirt on her. she looks cute in my clothes.

"thanks harry."she replied. she put her head on my shoulder, and we just stared at the lake down the road. it was really pretty at night. thats why i brought her up here.

"hey harry?"

"yeah?"

"can we sit down under the blanket?"

"yeah. sure."

i sat down on the lawn chair. she sat next to me. we were cuddling. i really like her. but i cant do anything stupid. im shirtless. with a girl beside me. lord help.

"harry?"

"yeah?"

"do you like me.....like more than a friend?"

"maybe."

"no. seriously do you?"she leaned on her one arm

"yeah. i really like you."

"then why do i have to make all the moves?"she laid back down.

"cause i dont wanna hurt louis. but do you like me like that?"

"i dont know."we both sat up.

"oh."we sat there silent for a few minutes. oh god. loouis is going to kill me.

"soooo...."she broke the silence.

"just shut-up and kiss me ash."i crashed my lips against hers. they were cold. so why not warm em up a bit??she didnt pull away. she put her hands on my neck and just played with my hair. oh god. louis. i cant do this i pulled away.

"are you sure this is okay ashley?"i asked her.

she kissed me again. we were making out for about half an hour before i could fit in anything.

"ill take that as a yes then."

"yes. harry. louis can deal with it."

louis pov

we got back from where me, niall, and liam went. i immediatly went inside. i walked in along side, niall, and liam. i looked everywhere on the bottom floor.

"where are you guys?harry?!ashley?!"i yelled.

ill go upstairs. there probably there. on youtube or something. i checked harrys room. then ashleys, and all the others. all thats left is the balcony. i opened the door.

"what the fuck harry!?"i screamed. he was snogging my girl. his hanfds were all over her. they jumped up. and liam and niall ran in the door.harry got up and began.

"listen....louis i can explain."

"NO!!!i dont get why every guy is going for her now. yeah. shes beautiful and perfect. but all of you knew i was gunna ask her out.!!!!"ikept screaming. she just had a blank look on her face.

"louis?................are you okay?"she asked and held out her hand. i pulled mine away and went inside. i slammed the door. i thought she really liked me.?well im the dumbest fucktard on the planet. i locked my door, and fell on my bed. i just laid there for hours. i drifted asleep for a few minutes and woke up to talking.

"harry. i shouldnt have done that. i was just sick of zayn, and louis fighting and me having to choose sides. im sorry. and i like you but i really really really like louis. okay?"

"yeah. i know ash. its okay. he really likes you too. but hes been in there for hours."harry and ashley kept muttering on outside my door. at least harry thought about backing off. then she wanted him to kiss her. or snog her. more like it.

"just go in. hell understand ashley. i promise."i heard liam say. him and niall mustve came upstairs.

"yeah. hell understand hes a good lad."i heard niall say.

my door had a weird noise of a key in it. then my door slowly came opened and shut. i closed my eyes.

"louis,.......can we talk........about harry, and zayn?"she aske dme. i want to, but dont want to.

"its okay. i heard everything. just you really dont like him do you?"

"no. louis. i like him as a friend. you more then that."