What do I do with her "brother"?

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Louis' POV

I looked at the little kid in front of me. He was bouncing on the motel bed happily.

"This bed is so fluffy!" He squealed as he jumped. I ran my hand through my hair. I had limited options and I wanted to go to Louise as soon as possible to tell her the truth. She needed to know. If she didn't know I don't think she would be too keen to stay at our house.

 "Max..." I said wearily. "I think you should get off the bed now. You might injure yourself." I didn't want to be going to the hospital. The last thing I wanted was for Max to be in a cast when he saw Louise again. If I let him come with me.

He frowned but stopped jumping on the bed.

I sat down next to him.

"Do you want to see Louise again?" I asked. He nodded his head excitedly.

"Of course I want to see Louie again! I love her!" I laughed a little. Little kids are so cute.

"Okay. I will let you see her. You just have to be really well-behaved... Okay?" He smiled and nodded again.

"I will, I promise." He said.

"Come on then." I stood up. "We're going to see her."

He jumped up and rushed to the door.

"One more thing though." I called out.

"What?" He asked in a whiny voice.

"You can't go and see her until I say you can." I said sternly.

"Okay." He said and tried to open the door. It was quite fiddly.

I grabbed my bag, which I had already packed, and helped him open the door.

Louise's POV

I paced around the room. The walls were starting to close in on me. I really didn't like it.

I jumped around, excersizing... In the most fashionable way.

I was doing such a complex excersize that I didn't even notice that someone opened the door.

"Hello?" They said. I turned around, startled. Standing in front of me was my brother.

Louis' POV

We pulled into the driveway. I walked in, holding his hand.

"Hi Lou Bear!" Harry called out excitedly.

"Hey!" Zayn called out, but I don't think he was talking to me.

"Yeah, Zayn! Three rounds in a row! Who's the boss!" Liam was cheering. I laughed.

"Good job Liam. Zayn, try harder." I said.

Zayn slumped down on the ground.

"Who do you have with you?" Niall asked. He pointed to Max.

"Louise's brother." I replied.

"She has a brother?" He asked as he bit into a waffle.

"Yep." I said.

"Where's Louise?" Max asked. Niall pointed.

"That way." He said. Max rushed to the door.

"No! Max! I didn't say-" He was already gone. I sighed and chased after him.

Louise's POV

"Max!" I breathed out as he rushed into my arms and squeezed me tightly.

"Louie!" He said, tears streaming down his small face.

"I missed you!" He said.

"I haven't been gone long." I said. But I could haved been gone for for a long time.

"I know..." He said.

"But still." I smiled.

"I'm glad you love me so much." I said, wiping his tears from his cheeks.

"Now stop crying." I said in a deep voice. "Young boys like you shouldn't cry." He laughed.

I looked up. A man was standing in the doorway... Louis Tomlinson.

"Look... I know this-" I stood up and hugged him, tightly. He stiffened. He wasn't expecting a hug.

"Thank you." I whispered. He loosened up.

"Thank you for bringing Max to me. I love him so much. I couldn't bear to be without him."

I didn't care what this guy had to tell me. The only thing that mattered was that Louis had let me see Max.

That's all I wanted...

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