Re-write?

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I was wondering if any of you would be interested in seeing a re-write of this story, since in my opinion the grammar, wording, ect isn't fantastic and I feel like in the time of when I wrote this story and now i have improved in those areas. However if you're already satisfied with this version then i guess there would be little point? xD 

Thanks for hearing me out! 

-Mystic 




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