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Th pure wedding ( Fem Shu x valt )

So this is my first Shu x valt story, if I something wrong, please give the comments to me and I will correct it

Valt POV
Today is me and shu wedding, I am love him very much. I a bit nervous for have the promise for him,I wear the pure white
tuxedo,white trousers，white leather shoes. suddenly someone come in,it was Honcho,I saw him and I feel relax my friend to comfort me do not be afraid to promise.
Shu POV
After I wear the pure white wedding dress,have the veil，wear the crystal shoes, hold the white flowers,I stand in front of the mirror. Thing a lot, like can I and valt will love each other ? I think many things for our future ,I hope in my wedding will make me feel the happiness.
Valt POV
Now it was time for our wedding. I am waiting shu for a bit long time. Suddenly, music was started, someone was come in, is shu, she is very beautiful to wear the wedding dress, I feel I a bit blushing for her, when she coming next to me ,the priest was said the swear
I said" I accept shu as my wife. I promise: I will be faithful to you every day of my life. It's good or bad, it's illness is health, I want to love you and respect you."
Then shu said
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I accept Valt as my husband. I promise: I will be faithful to you every day of my life. It's good or bad, it's illness is health, I want to love you and respect you."
After that, I uncover her veil,to exchange the rings,and we kiss
I love you shu, I promise you, I can give you the happiness to you
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At last, done it, I so excited after write this ship shorts 😊😊😊😊
What is your opinion ?
You can comments to me and I will do this.