Naruto OC reviews

OC 4 (Jirou Naosu)

This is also by iCoven.
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Genre: Fanfiction

Nice I hope to read the fanfiction.

Name: Jirou Naosu

Cute name

Gender: Male (kinda androgynous appearance)

Nice and ok.

Age: Part 1: 12-13
Part 2: 16-17
The last: 19
Gaiden: 32+

Oh so he is part of the naruto group's age. Nice.

Family: Shitensei Uzumaki-Naosu (Mother), Bōfu Naosu (Father, deceased), Keiichi "Zero" Naosu (older half-brother), Naruto Uzumaki (distant cousin, but it's only mentioned once until part 2)

Ok

Highest Rank: Chuunin

Exams Taken: Gennin, Chunnin

Exams Failed: None

Oh, so he only made it to chuunin? That's cool.

Appearance:
Since childhood, Jirou is often mistaken as a girl. Mostly due to having long eyelashes, long hair, and a soft voice. He was annoyed by it when he was younger, but he's grown used to it now and learned to use his looks to his advantage. His cheeks have always been rosy red, at least until part 2.

Oh this is different. He's a boy but he looks like a girl. That's different and unique.

Height: 5'4

Weight: 130

Nice height to weight ratio.

Skin tone: A little lighter than olive

Oh ok

Eyecolor: Dark Blue

Cool

Hair: Jirou's hair is naturally silky straight like his mother's, but white/grey like his father's. Though, at birth he was born with red hair, but it all fell out and grew back as white.

Oh that's interesting and different. But how did it change colors? When hair grows it comes back as the hair you were born with so how did it change to white?

Academy: Jirou wore his hair in a short ponytail and hair strands hanging in his face. Sometimes he even wore his hair down.

Oh, nice.

Part 1: the same hairstyle from the academy, but his hair is much longer. Sometimes he even wears his hair in pigtails. He gets teased about it by his peers though.

Oh so he likes wearing it in styles that he suits but people make fun of him for it. Mean but does happen.

Headband Location: right arm

Oh nice.

Accessories: he has double piercings on each ear and wears small hooped earrings. During the period where he goes through depression he wears a mask because he couldn't stand to look at himself and wanted no one else to see him either.

Oh so he goes through a phase. It's cool seeing he has earrings.

Clothes:
Jirou wears dark blue shorts with navy blue ninja sandals and bandaged ankles. He also wears a light blue jacket with white trimming and mesh armor underneath, and mostly has his jacket zipped closed. The back of his jacket has the Uzumaki clan symbol.