Naruto OC reviews

OC 78 (Yamauchi Menma)

This OC is by Hadassaam I hope you like it.
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Dear Reviewer, 

Hi I am Hadassam and I want you to please review my oc for my book, The Determination. Let me begin.

Naruto fanfiction oc

Name: Yamauchi Menma

Nice name

Age:
part one: 12,
part two: 16,
the last: 19,
Boruto: 32 

So the naruto age group.

Gender: female

Nice

Family: Daichi (father, alive and a civilian), Masuyo (mother, alive and a ninja), Saeko (older sister, dead and a ninja), Inori (older brother, alive and a civilian)

Nice and thanks for th life status and relations.

Appearance

Hair colour: dark brown

Beautiful common color

Eye colour: dark green

Beautiful common color

Hair length:
age twelve: her hair was long and in three ponytails but she chopped it off to look like a boy's own during the chunin exams
Age 16: back length, later cut to shoulder length during the war
19: shoulder length
32: back length

Cool

Dressing
Age 12: overalls, lower thigh stopping, white short sleeved shirt. Bandages for thigh high socks and on her arms to cover her scarred arms
16: A simple blue shirt and shorts with fish net on elbows and knees
19: a long sleeved blue long jacket, buttoned at the top, underneath it, a black shirt and shorts, with calf length ninja sandals and fishnet thigh high socks.
32: standard jonin outfit

Nice and I think the overalls could work, there are many characters with similar outfits to that clothing.

Personality : calm but stubborn. She has the ability to be calm even when insulted but freezes up when its a surprise. Stubborn as a donkey, hardly changes her mind or opinion, like her mother. She won't fight or argue but she would dig in her heels and not move, passively aggressive. She is also a tomboy in dressing.

This is really good she's the calm but won't change her mind type. Not a lot of people have this. It's usually one or the other.

Chakra natures: (primary) water, (secondary) earth, (tertiary) wood

Nice

Kekkei Genkai: (from her mother's side) Chō Nōryoku (meaning psychic ability)
It allows the user to see steps ahead of their opponent or possible moves. It quickens the agility of the user, to counter the attack. One miscalculation or wrong move could end up not allowing the user be able to counter.

Great weakness

First stage: awakening, can only see three steps
Stage 2: novice, five steps ahead
Stage 3: expert, fifteen steps
Stage 4: master, twenty steps
TbcHowever, overuse can cause temporary blindness or bleeding from the eyes and chakra depletion.
Permanent damages are permanent blindness and/or death due to chakra loss.