I know u thinking, "Hey why should I read this." What makes this so special that I shouldn't skip this, well because I wanted your personal opinion on something. I have a Drama Class in school and I wanted your guy's opinion on my script that I'm writing on, it's very long but, I hope you guys read till the end. It's only for this section though. Hope you guys enjoy and thank you for reading this and leave your comments down below on which mistakes I have made and or criticize me on what I should do better.
"Everyone has a story to tell...what's yours?....."
Arranged Marriage
Hannah Laurens- Lily=Zanni
Jaune Laurens- Gavin=Zanni
Jace Virus- Hermione=Zanni
Story ???- Annea=Zanni/Narrator
King Charles- Ryan=Vecchio
Queen Becka- Elizabeth=Vecchio
Prince Drew McIntyre- Nico= Innamorati
Rose Willows- Cristina= Innamorati
(picnic scene goes on with Cristina and Nico sitting down).
"You wanna go!" Rose stands up..
Drew slams the ground and throws food at Rose. "Lets go!"
"*SCREAMING*" Suddenly screams could be heard and and people with masks jumped on the two lovers and everything stops.
"Let me guess, you're wondering why, this is happening?" A girl with black hair said while gesturing her hands toward the group of people who froze. She grabbed a chair and sat in front/ at the side of the group. "My 'name' is Story, yes, it's Story and I'm the Narrator...and character. BUT THAT'S NOT THE POINT! Actually this is something that you don't normally see in a love story but--"
"Ooh! Can I help being the narrator?" A girl interrupted as she unfroze from her spot and went to Story's side/ popped up from behind Story.
"Hannah! What are you doing here!?!? Go back to your spot!" Story yelled at Hannah as she frowned.
"WHY! I could be a better narrator. I even have a better name in this story, STORY!" Hanna said with sass as she flipped her hair.
"Hannah go to your spot! AND STAY THERE! Also DON'T break the fourth wall! We don't have enough money to build a new one after you broke the LAST wall...and the other last five," Story pointed back to where Hannah was supposed to be standing.
"Actually it was six...SEVEN if you include this one! But who's counting Ana--" Hannah jokingly said and rolled her eyes before Story interrupted her.
"Hannah Laurens! Go back!" Story yelled, letting her frustration out. Hannah went back into her place and froze. Story sighed loudly and look back at the audience. "Like like I said, you're wondering why is this happening. Well let's turn back time."
Story clapps and the characters from the picnic began to rewind (Get rid of picnic table and set up a table using the blanket as tablecloth and set up a chair near it, then if we can put a cup on the table while Cristina has the coffee maker, also Nico sit on the chair while sipping the cup).
"Wait," Story grabs Hannah by the hood and turns Hannah's face towards her. "What are you wearing?"
"A robe...."Hannah hesitated.
"What kind?" Story questioned.
"Harry Potter," Hannah smiled.
"Take it off!" Story ordered. "And get rid of those pigtails."
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Otome Game?..... (MOVED ON TO ANOTHER BOOK. A REWRITE)CALLED "Full Of Wonder(?)
Losowe-------read to find out--------- *BY THE WAY I AM NOT THE KIND OF GIRL WHO JUST PICKS ONE OR TWO GENRES, I LIKE TO MAKE THIS RANDOM BUT IT MAKES SENSE AT THE SAME TIME.* THIS IS NOT COPYRIGHT  THE OTOME GAMES I'M JUST BORROWING THEIR CHARACTERS...
