Another thing I hate is those ODIs ( over descriptive idiots). They make the simplest of sentences so boring. When your teacher says "Add fluff to your stories" they don't mean make a fucking cake out of it.
Grabs pillow and starts screaming into it.
Any waaaay. As i was saying you don't need to turn your stories into a fucking cake. Have a slice. (Aren't I punny? Get it? Have a slice. Cake. No?)
I looked into his dark, green, perfect eyes and knew we would never be able to become each others lovers.
Now here it is simplifyed (its so fucking sappy).
I looked into his green eyes and knew we would never be lovers.
See the difference. I liked the second one much better.
I will probably be updating very frequently you see I'm not feeling good and I'm so bored. Please comment stuff for me to rant about and you could get a shout out!
