if scourge took over the forest...

is this home?

    SolWarriors (I'm not finished yet I just was excited to post it)
   Ravenpaws p.o.v
I looked at firestar. He's dieing nine times! Like tigerstar did. "BLOOD WILL RULE THE FOREST" scourge yelled. I hissed, "You won't get away with this" I snaraled. "wanna try" hissed scourge. I wasn't as brave as I thought I was, so i shook my head.
"Ravenpaw... your name will be raven! No buts!" Hissed scourge. I lost my warrior name? This isn't cool at all!
I padded deep into the forest. I never was a warrior anyways, but that name ment the world do me. I've reached about twoleg place by now I believe. Than I heard a russle in the Bush.
"Ravenpaw" mewed a she-cat. She was a ugly one but I do remember her from a apprentice. "Lily?" I asked as I glared at the brown she-cat. "You smell funny" she giggled. "Well I'm sorta a clan cat now, And my names raven" I purred than remembering scourge was my leader.
"You are?" She asked. "Well not exactly. I have the world's worst leader" I giggled. Lily purred, "Maybe it wouldn't be as bad if I joined you?" She asked. "YOU MEAN IT?" I asked in exitment. "Do I lie to you?" Lily purred.
I smiled, "than let's ask him" I purred.