I've been unhappy with the direction of Starbound since that last chapter, for understandable reasons. I've made many changes to the story, most to eliminate that mature rating and make me feel comfortable excelling with the pace of the story. Here is a list of changes I made you should know in order to continue reading -- because, yes, I am continuing writing.
CHAPTER 5; grammatical correction
CHAPTER 7; less mature rating
CHAPTER 10; same thing
CHAPTER 12; less lead up to something more
CHAPTER 13; they don't even have sex. this is the biggest change to the story, i suggest re-reading it if you want the full force of the plot
that's all. idk if i'll upload the smut separately, i'm still undecided.
YOU ARE READING
starbound - scomiche
Fanfiction"Don't you understand? He's the bad guy, plain and simple!" "Plain and simple? Doesn't he have, like, an ulterior motive or something?" Avi stared at him with his red and green eyes so intensely that Mitch was afraid he'd catch on fire. "Ever seen S...
