Niki opened her eyes. Sam was looking down at her, worried expression on her face. She sighed a sigh of relief when Niki woke up.
"Where-" but she was interrupted.
"Hello, welcome and welcome back. My name is Eric. I am a Dauntless leader and do you know what? I help judge and rank you all, so-"
"Rank us? I didn't know we were ranked," came a small, but confident, voice of a Candor girl.
"Yeah," agreed another- this one was an Erudite.
"Well you are ranked. As I was saying-"
"Well, If I knew we were ranked I wouldn't have-" the Candor girl began.
"Wouldn't what? Wouldn't have chosen Dauntless? Well then, I suggest you leave right now," came a voice of a young man. Hr walked beside Eric and crossed his arms. Niki thought he was quite handsome indeed.
The Candor and Erudite girls sweaked and the Erudite girl dove into the crowd, blushing.
"Well, now that our time is up thanks to some people, we will have to break up here. Dauntless born with me and Dauntless Transfers with Four." Eric took the Dauntless borns into a different car. Then, they started jumping off onto a building. Four led them to the same car and they jumped off too. For a second, Niki thought she wouldn't make it, but was proven wrong when her feet hit concrete and she fell and skinned her knees.
They walked over to the center of the building. Niki stole a glance at Four, who jumped into a huge hole in the roof, not that far from where they were standing.
Once he had jumped, Eric led them over to it. "Alright, who's gonna jump first?" Eric nodded towards the gap. A whole bunch of transfers looked over but there was only darkness. Well, if Four jumped and survived, so will we. Niki thought. She raised her hand and in a quite voice said,"I will," But it wasn't just her voice she heard. The Abnegation transfer- Beatrice Prior- had done the same at the same time as Niki.
"You, Stiff, can go first. Then, your little Amity friend here can go." Eric pushed Beatrice towards the gap. Niki swore she could hear the Stiff gulp as she stepped off the wall and fell through the hole. Niki heard her scream as she fell the whole way down- a long way aparently.
Eric looked at Niki and gave her a cold nod. She gulped also and stepped on the wall. She felt a push and fell, head first, down the hole.
Niki screamed the whole way as did Beatice. When she was about halfway down, she heard four yell out, "FIRST JUMPER, TRIS!" So she went by Tris now.
Niki hit the net and stopped screaming. Four was giving her a weird look. Niki realized that she had been screaming minutes after she hit the net. She blushed madly. Four helped her off the net and her skin tingled at his touch.
"Hi," she smiled shyly.
"Go through that door," Four said coldly. He looked amused. As Niki left, hurt by his reaction, she could feel him smirking behind her.
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First Breath
ФанфикNiki of Amity has always admired the Dauntless ways. When she turns 16, she must either stay in Amity with all of those she loves or go seek her dream of becoming Dauntless. Niki meets a nice man named Four. He shows her many things and she begins...