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*Peter's POV from the night before*
I can't believe (y/n) would say that she is a burden she is beautiful from top to bottom but always seems to put herself down and act like she is a burden but she never will be. I noticed her wiping her eyes meaning she was crying. A minute later Mr
Stark told (y/n) that she had potential as a hero! She would be working with me! Today has been the best day. She was gasping for air I prepared myself to catch her if she fell but she didn't. Mr. Stark said that we should get to bed and everyone filed out to their rooms. I was walking around trying to remember where I put my backpack when I spotted (y/n) in her pajamas in front of me. I caught up and said, "Hey I saw you crying again are you okay?" She nodded and said, "I'm just keep getting surprised on how much you random people who barely even know me are willing to take care of me." She smiled. I couldn't believe it everyone was helping her because she is amazing "you will never be a burden (y/n) you are being put through so much and yet you keep convincing you're self that you are the problem but you will never be okay?" She smile again and I pulled her into a hug suddenly she started shaking gasping and screaming. What dino do I thought frantically suddenly Thor came running down the hall to see what was happening. He looked at her and then at me and yelled, "WHAT DID YOU DO WHAT IS WRONG WITH HER!". I couldn't muster a response I didnt know what was wrong myself *author isn't used to writing in 1st person so if she says you instead of I she is sorry damn it she did it again* "I-i-i t-t-try t-to gi- hu-g an-d-" Thor looked like he was gonna kill me when thankfully Mr Stark cane running down the hall he froze and all he could muster was "Oh shit." He snapped out of it when Thor began to stomp and said, "thor she might 've having one of her flasklhbacks she seems to act strangely when she has them, Peter might have just said one of her trigger words."
*Time skip to when you calmed down and explained because author is to lazy to right it all*
I can't believe someone would do that  her kept in a cage with the promise of being released! She was to beautiful for that. Mr. Stark said that now we should get some rest and asked me if I was staying I need to stay unless anything else happens to (y/n) I thought and said "I'll stay just in case anything else happens." He nods and everyone leaves the room Thor stops and says "I'm sorry for blaming you about what happened I just don't want anything to happen to my precious sister." I emailed and say "it's okay Thor I won't let anything hurt her even if I have to die to do it." He nods and says "So I was right you do have a crush on her." I blushed and said, "Yeah a little." He laughed and said, "at least I know that someone will protect her but just a warning if you hurt her in any way shape or form it will be a miracle if you survive my wrath." Threatened to death by Thor I'm going to sleep well tonight I thought as I headed to the couch. I layed down and eventually dozed off in to sleep I woke up at 7 30 and headed to the bathroom to get ready. When I walked out I found someone in a red and blue suit resembling (y/ns) eyes I was confused and was about to say who are you when (y/n) pulled off the mask to show it was her "(y/n)!" I yelled in shock she laughed and said "shh you'll blow my cover." And put the mask back on. Then Mr.Stark said "Peter! It's good your here you can help with the training!"
*your point of view*
Tony was walking fast so he was ahead so now you and Peter where talking in the hallway you tripped and almost fell but he caught you with his web. You got your balance back and kept walking. Then Peter said "I have something important to tell you after we are done okay." You became suddenly curious of what it was but decided you would find out soon enough. Suddenly Tony stopped and said "here we are!" You walked inside and it was huge! You could have got your old house in this room "I took out all the for alarms last night so you can use your fire without calling the fire department." Tony said. You got arranged and summoned your trident. Only Thor, Tony, and Peter where watching. "All right (y/n) you showed us some of your powers yesterday now show us some more!" Tony said. You nodded and tried to make the room dark and you imeadiatly made it pitch black "woah did the power go out?" Tony said. "Nope just me." You said. You focused on making the room light again and you formed another chandileier in the ceiling. "That will never get old!" You heard Peter yell. Sweet innocent Peter. Suddenly you heard Thor yell "in the battle against the hydra you made a sword of metal and warriors of clay try that!" You sounded badass and as a kid too you first tried the sword you could summon the metal but couldn't shape it so you decided to try the clay warriors once again the clay had the same problem you couldn't shape it so you kind of decided to try earth but couldn't seem to do it you tried water but it wouldn't come "What are you doing?" Thor asked "I'm trying to do it but I can't it isn't working." "Keep trying" Thor said "I am" you responded desperately . You couldn't make anything happen so you cal.ed down and cleared tour mind then you could do it again "there we go now it works" I looked for looks of encourage ment but all you saw was Thor looking angry "What is it?" You asked "you have to learn to keep your powers up what if that happened in a battle with an enemy?" You where at a loss for words "I don't know what was wrong I just couldn't move or create anything." "Excactly my point sister If you had been fighting the evil then you would have been decimated." You got angry "thanks Thor o come here out of no where get pushed into having to save asgaurd and fight some horrible evil but all you care about is asgaurd isn't it? You wouldn't care if I was decimated you just care about the safety of asgaurd!" You yelled angrily at him and stormed out of the room, quite literally you could hear thunder and the latter of rain drops. You walked out of avengers tower and jumped on a ball of air. You let the tears come. This was the truth. You aren't important to anyone here except as a tool. You head to the top of the building across the street and stare into space crying your heart out. You hear something land behind you. You yell that you are armed and will hurt them before whipping around to see Peter in his suit. You didn't want to talk to him. You tapped into a reserve of strength you didn't know you had and flew away in the wind. You found yourself laying on the beach. You let more tears come as the waves beat against the shore. You always loved the sound of the ocean. It reminded of you of your first day with Sarah and Jack. They took you too the beach for the first time ever and let you sit there and listen to the waves all day. You head back to reality when you feel a hand on your shoulder. "Don't fly away this time okay?" You heard Peter say through the mask. You just put your head in your arms and continued to cry. "You know (y/n) I really care about you a lot. So does Thor." Yeah Thor he cares so much. "Hey, if I give you a hug and tell you before will you still hyperventilate?" You shook your head. As long as you knew someone was going to hug you it was ok but surprise hugs didn't work to good. "Well then I'm giving you a hug." Peter said as he wrapped his arms around you. He seemed like freshly fallen rain and mint your favorite smells *those are actually just the authors favorite smells* he pulled you into his lap where you still stayed curled up and crying. He rain his fingers through your (h/c) hair and rested his chin on your head. "You know from the second we walked into that building to train for the first time I actually got a huge crush on you" he said. You pulled your heart eyes out of your arms and asked "what?" "I like you and wish that I never have to see you like this again. You can never talk to me again if you want it's just I can't keep it inside any more." You took a deep breath and said "I feel the same way." You wrapped your arms around him and buried your face into his chest. He kissed your forehead and said, "last night after we left your room Thor guessed it and he told me that he never wanted any thing to happen to you because you where to precious to him. And then he told me if I broke your heart that it would be a miracle if I survived." You smiled and said, "let's go back." He nodded and stood up. He said "hang on to me." You knew what was happening so you grabbed his chest tightly and held on for dear life. Once you arrived you walked inside to the living room where you found Thor eating potato chips and pacing. He noticed you on the turn around and somehow in the span of 3 seconds had wiped his hands thrown the potato chips on the counter and brought you into a full hug. You could see Peter tense and open his mouth to yell but you held up your hand to say you where okay. Wanda taught you this morning a breathing exersises to help. You could barely do the breathing part because Thor was practically crushing you. "Thor I need some air bro." You said and he let go of you you took in a gulp of air and put your hand on a wall to steady yourself "I'm sorry I forgot about the hugging thing and I shouldn't have pushed you to har-" you held up you hand to motion for him to stop. "Its okay Thor. Peter helped me get over the hugging thing and Wanda thought me a trick for when I do flip out. Peter also told me something that mad meme realize that you do care." Thor looked at Peter with eyes that said thank you a million times over. You took his arm and said, "I'm sorry for storming out,quite literally, I should have stayed and listened."  Thor sighed and said, "no I should have never pushed you and I want to explain you are not just a tool to save asgaurd you are my sister and I don't want you to think I don't care about you because I do." "Yeah, Peter told me about that." You smiled. You brought him in for another hug. You didn't feel any hyperventalation this time. Tony came in and said, "All right so are we good now? Because you ok da flooded my training room with your storm and I don't know how to get rid of it." You sighed and said "Sorry Tony I'll go fix it right now." You got to the door and Tony said, "Get ready it's a mess!" You pulled out your trident and braced your self. He opened the door and you immediately stopped the water from coming out. You suddenly made it all disappear and calmed the storm. You went back in to keep training when Tony said, "now that you can at least control them slightly Peter is going to help you with hand to hand combat untill Natasha gets back from her mission tomorrow. You nodded and Peter walked down the floor and said "I don't teach well and sorry if I hurt you okay?" You nodded and said, "I cut my leg on the way out of the parallel universe and it healed already so I think I heal fast." He nodded then through a random punch. Your mind took over and you doged it. You then proceeded to punch him square in the stomach causing him to crumple. You saw your chance and kicked his chest. His reflexes fought it before it hit. You smiled. This is exactly what you wanted. You walked up his chest and kicked his jaw. He imeadiatly let you go. You did a back flip and landed on your feet. While he was distracted you delivered the final blow a strange kick square ing the chest. He fell over and said "I surrender have mercy before you break my rib." You stopped and said, "uhh sorry natural reflexes." He laughed and said if you can do that naturally who ever pisses you off is in some serious trouble. You heard applause from the doorway "that was amazing (y/n)! You got to teach me your moves!" It was Wanda! "Hi Wanda! Supposedly Peter was teaching me hand to hand combat but I think that I reversed the role!"  She laughed and said "I really think you did!" You both started laughing when Tony said, "Peter might be an easy opponent but I won't be!" He walked twords you and said, "let's do this" "before we start Tony if I hurt you you have been warned." He laughed and said "I find that highly unlikely." You rolled your eyes suddenly you saw him pull a quick punch you went low slid under him got behind him and did an awesome sweep kick that knocked him off his feet. You waited for him to get up and make a move. He got up and attempted a leg sweep like you but you stepped on his foot mid sweep. He said "okay I surrender just don't break my foot." You nodded and let him go. Wanda laughed and said "looks like you got some competition old man!" He glared at you but you two just laughed. Suddenly an alarm went off. " did I set something on fire?" You asked worried. Tony said "no that's the crime alert your AI has." "So do uhh AI what's happening a woman's voice said "there is a team of armed robbers robbing the central street bank." "How about you and Peter go it's only like 10 minutes from here and armed robbery isn't that serious." Wanda said. Tony nodded and said "it wil give(y/n) a chance to use her powers but first she needs a name." "I want to be called Avatar. It was the last thing my foster parents watched with me." Tony nodded and said well then be gone with you." You and Peter left. "All right spider man don't worry." You nodded and you sent both of you up using air. You used your strength and launched both of you to the bank within seconds. You walked in and winked at Peter. He seemingly got what was going on. "Wait what's happening we just wanted to withdraw some money and now it's getting robbed? How are we supposed to do anything fun now?" The robbers whipped around at the sound of you voice he yelled "WHO ARE YOU?" "What you don't recognize me? I'm slightly offended. Well let me introduce you I am Avatar and this is spider man." He then yelled "I don't care who you are just turn around and leave or I'll shoot 3.." You laughed with Peter he didn't know what was happening "2..." You and Peter stopped laughing "I'll take care of this nation you get the others." You whispered ing his ear "1..."  "Oh stop procrastinating and shoot me already!" He smirked and said "if you say so" and pulled the trigger Peter headed off in the other direction as you propelled the bullet into the wall. "Missed me missed me!" You taunted him as he pulled the trigger again. You moved this one the same as before "oops you did it again!" You stepped forward as he kept pulling the trigger only to have them fly into the wall soon he was out of bullets. "Oh no this isn't fair now is it? You against me a begginer super hero in hand to hand combat I guess I just have to try my best." He laughed and said "I love it when life is easy!" You laughed. He quick punched you but you dodged it and grabbed his arm. You tightened your grip and spun it quickly around. "Gahh!" He cried in pain. You let him go and this time you did the first kick you did it wimpy on purpose so he would catch it "Hah now in gonna make you pay!" You just smirked and walked up his chest and kicked him in the chin the same as you did to Peter you heard him laugh across the room. Shit. He needs help doesn't he better finish this guy quick. You thought as you thrust air at him making him crash into the wall. You summoned metal and this time you could shape it you put him in a cage. Just them the power went out. "Hah good luck finding us now!" You heard some one say you just laughed and used your light to make a chandelier "thank you for your encourage ment!" You added sarcastically as they froze. You winked at Peter and trapped them in a cage just like the other guy. "Well we hate to leave but we got places to be and one of them isn't here!" You said as you and Peter walked out of the building leaving everyone cheering. Just like in the memory you thought as you walked into an alley so peter could change out of his suit. It was extremely annoying the amount of people that had been taking pictures. "Wait Peter people are going to think it's weird if I walk out with you not in your spider suit and I'm still in my suit. I have to yell bye spidey and you swing to another alley to change and I will meet you there okay? I really don't need you to risk your identity." He nodded and started to put his suit back on. He said  "okay I'm ready." "All right let's do this!" You cleared your throught then yelled "BYE SPIDEY!" At the top of your lungs. He winked and flew off to the alley you guys arranged for. You waited 5 minutes then headed over. You flew on air and when you landed he still wasn't finished changing "Oh my God I'm sorry you said and turned around. He said "it's okay I just need to put my shirt on its not like you saw me in boxers." You rolled your eyes. He said "all right I'm done" you grabbed onto him and launched so high that people couldn't see you and landed at avengers tower. Only to be greeted by Thor and Wanda telling and cheering at the top of their lungs Thor pulled you into a squeeze and said "at this rate you'll be just as popular as spider man!" Wanda squeezed you too "That was amazing wait till Natasha sees your hand to hand combat she is going to flip!" You smiled and hugged her back. You headed back inside to the training room and battled Peter and Tony at the same time. They agreed no powers except for Peters natural ones such as spidey sense and reflex. They had a team strategy Tony came at you from one side and Peter at the other you paused waited for the right moment jumped and do a split kick to both of their faces. They stumbled back and you decided to pick off Tony first than deal with Peter. You ran full charge at him pretending to punch but at the last second while he was ready to duck you launched down and sweep kicked him"all right Peter don't let me die in vain but I surrender." You laughed and here's for Peter next full charge ready to punch he expected you to do the sweep kick again so he braced him self for that and instead you punched him square in the face. "Geez (y/n) you hit me harder than most villains I surrender stop before you break my nose!"  You helped him up and said "Sorry I did warn you though." He laughed and said "Yeah, you did." He stared in to your eyes for a while before you blushed and turned away Tony said "all right let's grab some grub it's all ready 6:30! (Y/n) take off y our suit and wash up we will go out." You nodded and headed to you and Wanda bathroom grabbing a pair of black jeans a white t-shirt and a bra. You showered blow dried your hair and got dressed in the span of 15 minutes. You threw on some light makeup and converse before heading out the door. When you closed it behind you you noticed something on your hand. It was a trident in the middle of a red and blue yin and yang sign. Oh shit. You ran to find Thor and almost fell flat on your face in the process you remembered this time without passing out the symbol meant  that you had something dangerous ahead a sign mom had left to keep you as safe as possible until you found her again. Meaning she was still alive! Yay something's coming but at least moms not dead! You found Thor, Peter, Wanda, and Tony talking together. They saw your face and Peter said "Is something wrong (y/n)?" You nodded and regained your breath "So I remembered something because this showed up on my hand." You held out your hand to show everyone "it's a sign my mom gave me in order to warn me of coming danger, while it stays there is a threat but after it disappears the threat is gone." Peter looked at it again then looked at you straight in the eyes. "Well then I guess we aren't going out then?" Tony said. "We don't have to of you guys don't want to but I'd much rather go outside and try and find this danger so it can pass." Tony nodded and said "makes sense but we are all taking bags with hero gear, got it?" You smiled and nodded. Every one headed out the door. You started to follow but Peter stopped you, waited for everyone to round the corner, pulled you in close and kissed you full on the lips. (A/n Sorry if I don't post for as much it is almost impossible for me to write these chapters with school work and everyday life taking up all my energy. *mark zuccerburg* LIES YOU SPEND ALL DAY ON INSTAGRAM AND WATCHING ANIMAE! *me* slaps across room)
To be continued.........

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