In Abnegation

Chapter one

I just watched my brother pick Erudite. I watched his blood turn the water pink.

"Beatrice Prior."

I hear Marcus Eaton say. I walk up and cut my hand on the blade.

I hold my hand between the Dauntless and Abnegation bowl. I move my hand to the left and spill my blood on the cold, grey stones. I grab a napkin, and walk towards abnegation.

I am brave.

I am selfless.

I am Abnegation.

No.

I am Divergent.

When I get home from the choosing ceremony I walk straight up to my room and cry; I cry, and cry, and cry.

I can't believe my brother chose Erudite. I know it's very selfish of me, but I mean who wouldn't cry if their brother was a traitor? My mother walked in.

"Oh, honey." she said n a sweet voice. She sat beside me and I crawled into her lap and cried into her chest. Okay that is very non Abnegation of me, but I can't help it.

After I was done with my crying fit I just went straight to bed, thinking of my life in abnegation.

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