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Chapter 16 -The Beach-

I got my awesome new bathing suit on, Connor bought me it:

It was purple, my favorite color.

I was all ready and went to see if the boys were also.

I opened the door and saw Ricky and Connor. Kian and Jc couldn't come they had to go somewhere.

"Hey cutie!" Connor said picking me up and throwing in the air.

"Hey, ready for the beach?" Ricky asked me.

"So ready!" I said.

It's been a while since I've seen charley, and I was pretty excited.

Charley (even though she's eight years older than me) was like my best friend.

"oops, i forgot my towel. Be right back!" I said, i ran into my room.

i grabbed my new towel.

"Okay, we're gonna stop at starbucks." Ricky said.

"Of course we are!" Connor said looking at Ricky.

I giggled at Connors facial expression.

"Okay, lets get going I need my White chcolate mocha!!" Ricky whined.

"Okay, lets go!" I said.

We walked down the stairs.

Out the door, Ricky really wanted his starbucks.

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After ricky and Connor got their Starbucks we were of to the beach.

It was about noon.

We got to the beach I saw Charley with another girl.

She had brown hair and blue and green eyes.

I held Connors warm hand.

He looked down and smirked at me.

Ricky was slurping his mocha.

We reached Charley and the girl.

"Hey, how's my baby girl Audrey!?!" she came over to me.

"Good!" I said giggling as she lifted me up in the air.

"Hey Nicole, this is Audrey Connor's new daughter!"

She said facing me to the girl, Nicole.

"Aw, she is as cute as you described her!" she said.

Charley put me down. "Hey, check out the waves!" she said running over to them.

I followed so did Connor.

He and Charley held my hands and i went flying into the air.

I saw a boy behind us.

Jack..

"Hey, Audrey?" he said.

I turned around.

"Jack?" I smiled.

"Who's this!?" asked Charley.

"This is my friend Jack." I ran to him and gave him a hug.

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We played until five.

"Okay, i bet someones tired!" Connor said.

"yea.." i answered.

Connor carried me back to the car.

I fell quietly to sleep in his shoulder.

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Hey so how'd you like chapter 16?

I thought it was pretty good.

My favorite part was: "Okay, we're gunna stop at starbucks!" Ricky said.

I decided to add some comedy to it.

Also, i TOTALLY forgot about Jack, so i was like "Frig..what about Jack?"

Then i had the idea that audrey would see him at the beach!

Please like, comment your thoughts, and VOTE!!!!

Thanks! ~Ava~ <3