3rd place-
Emma_259
I loved the topic you took up. There were many, many entries about betrayal and revenge, but the twist at the end was too die for.... okay bad pun, haha. It really touched me cause I felt pity for her son. Your writing flowed very smoothly and very few grammar mistakes, great job!
2nd place-
faulette
I have to say you would've been first, but you had a few grammar and spelling mistakes I could point out on my first time through. However in your story for a whole I felt as if I was reading the wrong entry. It just didn't seem right. I was utterly confused as to what would go wrong or who could be the villain. I thought she would kill him, but I saw no reason for which she would do so. The twist you added was great, absolutely loved it!
1st place-
-TCPL-
The was ghost twist was very eccentric and enjoyable, but what I loved was your writing style. It was extremely smooth and elegant. There were a few places where the paragraphs weren't split properly, but in my first time going through it I didn't see any grammar mistakes.
I was delighted by the turn and thus time many people had interesting and unique entries. However I was forced to choose three, so please do not be dissapoinyed if you weren't chosen this time. Enter again, and maybe you will be chosen next time!
'Till next time,
Redrobin💖
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