Sorry for the late update. I have this disease called the procrastination syndrome.
3rd place-
owcgin
I could see where you were going, but the plot line was extremely confusing. Also next time please make it an actual story rather than the back and forth conversation of characters. You may have to work on your grammar a bit, but other than that great job.
2nd place-
Creative_Dragon
You had a very intriguing story line, but next time try to add more paragraphs. You were also pretty blunt with some of the way you said stuff, but I loved the way you ended it. I had to re-read it to understand that you had killed Peter.
1st place-
PotatoQueen300
You had good story except for a few grammar mistakes and the fact you were way too blunt in your speech. You ended it quickly and with no mysteriousness.
Thank you all for enterinf and I am truly sorry for updating so late. I know I promised someone I would update lilelast week, but I complete forgot and am so so so sorry. I'll try to get the next prompt updated asap and hope y'all enter! 💖💖
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