Gosh... This was no doubt the hardest one to judge. I had four entries for which I'm each proud of, but too my disdain I could only choose the top three. My first way of judgement is how the story line flows, but all four of y'all's was fantastic! Therefore I had to take a step forward and look for minor grammar mistakes like commas etc. Using those I was finally able to judge. Please do not be dissapointed if you didn't make the leaderboard this time for you may make it there next time! 💖💖
3rd place
Carla_The_Exeed
Your story line was no doubt mesmerizing, but there were a few choppy parts and grammar mistakes. But no doubt I believe you could continue this and make it better and longer.
2nd place-
@aprilforthewyn
I loved the plot line of your story. It was really good and you should totally continue it. The main reason you were second is because it began to become slightly confusing. If I hadn't known the prompt and if you hadn't included the ending snip, the reader might have been able to put together who the antagonist is but it's hard to tell that she is the superhero. Make that a bit clear and you have a great story.
1st place
Consstalation
Hats of to you. Just like you last entry you submitted this one was just as fantastic. (Your name used to be c_elery right?) I was mesmerized by the detail and flow of the story. The only fault I could find was a few missing/misplaced commas. I beg of you to please do continue this story for it was fantastic and the cliffhanger has me hooked. If you do ever end up writing more I insist you tag or tell me cause I would gladfully read it.
The last person that entered was MikaelaYuuEmma. You had a really good story line. I absolutely loved the twist you added. The only reason you weren't on the leaderboard was because your story was really short and sounded extremely rushed. Please do not be offended and I hope to hear from you again.
I'll have the next prompt updated asap, so don't forget to add this book to your library and stay updated!!!💖💖
P.s.
If you want your prizes as stated in the second chapter don't forget to PM for them ;)
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