Tori Lynn has one dream - to grow her sweets shop into a New York dessert landmark. She expects there to be competition, mischief, and hard work when opening up a store front. What Tori doesn't expect is to join the ranks of the nation's top bakers in a televised competition. There is much more at stake when faced with a camera, crew, and drama-hungry producers. Will Tori prevail and gain worldwide popularity for her business, or will the spectacle of televised rivalry and love overcome her?
title/cover:
title: love it! it's really cute, actually. it captures the essence of the story really well with just three words. the author has incorporated an aspect of the baking, as well as hinted towards a romance!
score: 5/5
cover:
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the cover is really cute, although I feel that it can use more color. a story like this one has endless creative possibilities!
score: 4/5
total: 9/10
summary/hook:
summary:writing summaries is challenging for everyone! it's difficult to capture the essence of the entire story in just a paragraph or two. the author has managed to do it really well. one suggestion i have is to modify this sentence:
"There is much more at stake when faced with..."
perhaps reword so that there is a noun in there somewhere:
