Individuality -the particular character, or aggregate of qualities, that distinguishes one person or thing from othersThis story takes place in an imaginative world where some special people awaken a power called Spirit. Few of the lucky ones who awaken Spirit later enter Academies where they learn how to control their powers and benefit the world with it. This year in particular, quite a lot of students enter New Baymort Spirit Academy, seventeen to be exact.Seventeen individuals with different personalities and backgrounds. The only thing that unites these individuals is that they all have Spirit.Where did it go wrong?
title/cover:
title: very short and simple. usually, one-word titles can be boring, overused, or generic, but i can see it easily being the title of a movie or series, because it's memorable and encompasses the plot well.
score: 5/5
cover:
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really, really cool. there are a lot of characters in this story, and the author includes all of them in the cover. it's impressive that they were able to find such a fitting picture. the colors are not as eye-catching. a vivid shade here or there could make it more appealing.
score: 4/5
total: 9/10
summary/hook:
summary: the summary is nice and short, and gives the reader a good idea of what the story is about. after reading it, i was instantly intrigued by the "Spirit" and the academy. there are some suggestions i'd like to offer, just to improve the flow:
