What makes a Mary Sue? How do you fix it? (Part 2)

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Erm, change of plans

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Erm, change of plans. I'm just going to do likes and dislike since I forgot what I was planning oops.

In a lot of Mary Sue's they usually hate their love rival(s), the main antagonist(s), bullying, mean people, rude people, troublemakers, etc. and LOVE: hugs, cuddles, sparkly stuff, color, rainbow colors, Senpai-Kun", best friend!, MC(s), good people, parties, confetti!, etc.

In my OC, Miriyin, she hates: the rest of her species, people trying to defy her, being underestimated, Lotor's plans (even if she's a general for him. It's very complicated), her parents (because of backstory, it's long), and rainy days. She likes; winning, gambling, exploring space, people on her side, being the best, sleeping, and warm, sunny days.

Have a balance between each, of at least make it reasonable. You can dislike a few people and actions however, not everything can be about it. Maybe your OC can hate Spicy food or Winter. Maybe they can despise cold days.

You also shouldn't like everything, I get it. You OC may be a touchy person/species but they don't need to like rainbows and crap! They can maybe like certain hobbies or weather preferences, maybe certain actions or animals.

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Shekwlwmdm that was short oops sorry

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