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Title: love hurts Author: nehajj1234 Reads :1 k Votes: 585 Parts: 14 (unfinished) Main characters: Sam Jamie Deja
Characters The characters in this text story are rather flat but I assume that's to be expected from a text story. It seems that the characters only care about falling in love or not dying. However there is a balance between genders which is pleasant.To add more depth to the story maybe interactions between older family members or friends, which would allow the reader to see how the character changes around a person that may be higher up in the social standing or that they respect.
Plot The plot is rather strange. It is jumpy and confusing with no clear goal. For my liking it is to fast paced and doesn't take the time to root the characters in the readers mind.The relationships between the characters are also bemusing as there are so many new characters added without much need. However the frame work of the plot is good and with some polishing could convey a nice story. I think having one character throughout being the first person for the reader would of also given the audience more clarity.
Would I recommend it to a friend? Personally no, unless they liked text story's then yes.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Authors note: I don't think that I will review text story's, I don't find them enjoyable on a whole. However please still drop me a message if you would like me to review a story! Tanks for stopping by,
