THIRD POINT OF VIEW OF THE HAWKS AKA (KANER AND JONNY'S INTERACTIONS) Yo so i never ever write in third person without like having to look over another character's shoulder so im going all in third person and doing both characters at once and not going into any form of "I" so yea tell me your thoughts. Oh and schools starting again so my updates may be more spread out! really though this is hard for me so i really would like feed back!
The team plane was eerily quiet as they all dragged their sore bodies up the steps. Sharpy came up to Kaner and grabbed the back of his neck steering him into a seat, "Don't even think about it," he hissed to Kaner as he shoved him into the seat catching the look Kaner gave the back of the plane, where Tazer was most likely sitting.
Sharpy knew better than to ask what's been going on with Tazer and Kaner for the past year. Sad looks from Kaner, Tazer drinking constantly, neither of them speaking, getting separate rooms, etc, "So Abby and I are kidnapping you and bringing you out to dinner when we get back home," He said as the plane was taxing down the runway. All Kaner did was nod and go back to looking out the window solemnly. Sharpy sighed, Kaner was the one of the best guys on the team and whatever happened between them he knew had something to do with Kaner's friend, Lani.
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As everyone was getting off the plane, Sharpy grabbed Kaner's arm, "You know, I'm here for you. You can talk about anything with me."
Kaner's eyes turned stormy and then his face shuttered closed, "Know what Sharpy," he didn't say it as a question, "No. No I can't tell you anything because you have an "A" and your duty to the team is to report when a player is having problems with a teammate so no I can't tell you anything because you're obligated to tell Coach. I'll come to your interrogation, I'll sit their with your wife and make small talk about the season, but I can't- I won't talk about what my problem is. My problem's not with you, Sharpy, it's with the Captain." With that Kaner ripped his arm out of Sharpy's grip and strode swiftly to his car, looking straight ahead.
Sharpy glanced behind him to see Tazer staring after Kaner, he looked at Sharpy and walked to his car. Shapry just shook his head, and went home to see his beautiful wife.
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Kaner knocked on the Sharps' door at 8, Abby came to the door, "You have a key, idiot." She cooed as if he were five years old. Kaner just smiled at her and ducked his head.
Sharpy appeared in the door and pushed Kaner down the steps, "C'mon Peeks." Kaner smiled for once upon hearing the endearing nickname. He was going toward his car, but Sharpy grabbed him and steered him into the back seat of their car. The drive to Harry Caray's Tavern, (huge thanks to the anon who told me awesome restaurants in chicago) one of Kaner's favorite places.
When they were sitting down, Kaner on one side Sharpy and Abby on the other, "Um, what did you bring me here for?" He said it quietly, fear filled his eyes as if they were going to tell him he was traded to Detriot. On table he was wringing his hands, Sharpy covered Kaner's hands gently.
"Peeks--" Kaner looked up tears threatened to overwhelm him, "Oh Pat," Sharpy slid out of the booth and wrapped his arms around the smaller man. Kaner sighed deeply against him, niether of them noticed Abby slip out of the booth to the bathroom. Kaner pulled away after a minute and sniffled, "Pat we love you okay? You're family, and I don't just mean Abby and I, I mean the whole team. You've matured, and caring, and nice. Even to the rookies, Pat we love you and sure i have the "A" but that doesn't mean I don't care about you and you can tell me anything. I don't care what it is, I'm not gonna tell him," Kaner turned away at the mention of Tazer. Sharpy grasped his shoulder, "I PROMISE Pat. I promise that I won't say a word to anyone. Please just let us, let me help you."
"I-I-Please Sharpy. I don't know what to say. Sharpy, I'm out of ideas, I'm exhuasted, I feel sick, I want Jonny back, that's all I want. I just want Jonny back." Kaner looked at Sharpy for help.
"Buddy, I know. I want him back to. Saad is talking to him now." Kaner's face suddenly turned frightened, "Hey, Pat its okay, its going well. Saader is keeping me updated."
Abby appeared back at the table, "Hey boys," Kaner smiled up at her. They ordered drinks and food. Small talk started up, just stupid talk like Burish, how Saader has a huge crush Crow, how much Crosby pisses off Abby..." Sharpy's phone rang and Kaner peeked over his shoulder to see the name "Man-Child" pop up.
"I gotta take this," Sharpy piped up and shoved Kaner gently out of the seat.
"Maddie misses you Pat," Abby said from across the table.
"I know I haven't hung out with Maddie in forever but," Kaner started.
"Nope, no "buts". You're hanging out with Maddie next off day. Promise me?"
Kaner sighed, he knew the Abby knew, the he would never break a promise, " Fine, I guess I can come." He smiled as he said it.
Abby pulled out her phone and texted Sharpy, ~Phase One is complete. Begin Phase Two.~
~Phase one is complete on Saaders end. He has set Phase two in motion. Get Kaner ready~
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"Okay youre coming over tomorrow at noon, 'kay?"
"Kay" Kaner smiled.
YOOOOOOOOO OKAY SORRY ITS BEEN SO LONG IVE HAD A WICKED BAD CASE OF WRITERS BLOCK AND JUST PUSHED THIS OUTTA ME. UGHHHHHHHHHH ANYWAYYYYYYYY PRETTY BORING CHAPTER I GUESS. SHARPY BEING THE AMAZING PERSON HE ALWAYS IS, AND KANER WORKING HIS SHIT OUT. AND RECRUITING SAADER INTO HIS PLANS. MMMWWAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH! >:). OKAYYY THEN... TELL ME WHAT YOU THOUGHT OF THE THIRD PERSON I REALLY NEED FEEDBACK! as always first comment gets dedication!!

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Tell Me You Love Me Tonight (book two of YMT)
Fiksi PenggemarBook two. Following the story of You're Mine Tonight. Lani moves back to Boston to work her dream job, freelance photography. She left everyone in Chicago when she moved, but when they come to visit her everything changes.