Sorry it's a little late
NoirEleven's "m e l o d y/ Kakyoku" is a book that focuses on the life of Kennedy Jones. Her past was turbulent and is instrumental to the reserved nature she now adopts - music being her only escape. However, when Jordan enters her life she begins to imitate the behaviour she vowed to drop. Follow Kennedy as she battles her demons.
Noir Eleven would like feedback on how you perceive Jordan. And opinions on whether you think the book will benefit from lengthy or shorter chapters. The word count is about 1000.
Poet_Writer16's story "Regret" is about Estelle who has been forever attached to her past and throughout the book she stumbles upon a few people who help her. The genre is teen fiction. The author would like feedback on can the reader relate to the character? Anything I should improve on, etc. Average word count is about 1200-1300.
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Bwwm book club {Open}
RandomThe Bwwm Book club is a place where story creators can get more attention on their works. Not only that but also recieve critiques and feedback on how they can make they're writings better. (All interracial relationship books are allowed not just bw...
