I went back a read this story from the beginning.
Awful.
Pure, disgustingly, awful piece of work. So starting now, I'm revising, and i'm going back to my original version, which is Sci-Fi, because I liked it better and it makes more sense. I'm going to be changing a few details, making the grammar better, you know, the whole 9. I just really feel like i need to do this, so, even thought I haven't been updating, once I'm oved into my house at the beginning of August, I will be posting regularly. Promise. I'll be updating you on the progress!
