Zootopia (rewritten)

the first human in Zootopia

Hey guys! This is my very first Zootopia story. It is rewritten from the of Zootopia movie with an additional character who comes from a different dimension, and the tritagonist of the story. I hope you guys like it.

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After Judy say goodbye to Nick and Finnick, she heard a sudden commotion on the other side of the street. A group of teenage mammals are picking up on another animal a strange helpless creature so badly.

"Why don't you just go back to where you came from?!" a hippo yelled.

"Yeah, maybe your so-called 'another world' is really dumb!" a tiger added.

A 19-year-old human girl with insect fairy wings, long black hair, and dark-brown eyes, who wears a white dress and black shoes, glared at the teenage mammals that picked up on her, and yelled "Hey! My world is not dumb! It's normal!"

"Oh really?" a cheetah teased while holding a green remote control with a small satellite cable on top of it "If your world is normal, why don't you just leave our world, and never come back?!"

"I will leave this world if you just give me my remote control!" the human girl tried to take the remote from the teenage cheetah, but he throws to a teenage moose.

"Hey! Give it back!" the human girl shouted, but the teenagers still passes the remote to each other, until the teenage tiger caught it, and press the button of the remote that opens a green portal to another dimension, where it's full of carnivorous plants.

"That is not my world!" the human cried. "I don't belong there!"

"You do now!" the teenagers chuckled as they push the human near the portal, but...

"Hey!" Judy shouted at the teenagers, "Leave that creature alone!"

The teenage mammals saw Judy crossing her arms and glaring at them.

"Ey boys, look at this!" a teenage hippo chuckled, "I never saw a bunny meter maid before! She's so cute."

"Don't call me cute, kiddo!" Judy said angrily, "And you have to let her go or else."

"Or else what?!" the teenage tiger asked loudly.

"Or I'll tell the ZPD to call your mothers about what you did to that innocent creature." Judy smirked.

The teenagers think that the bunny makes a good point. They slowly put Aggie down, pats her head, and the tiger gives the remote back to the human.

"Now go and play somewhere else!" Judy commanded as the teenagers murmured while leaving.

The human girl quickly presses a button to close the portal.

Judy ran over towards the human and lifts her under her arm to help her get up. "Are you okay?" Judy asked.

"I'm fine. Thank you." The human girl replied as she rubbed her head, and puts the remote inside her back pocket, and shrinks herself into a rabbit size.

Judy looks at the girl, feeling confused as she asked, "What are you?

"Oh... um, I'm a human." The girl answered.

"A human?"

"You don't know human? You don't have humans here in this world?"

"No. They're not familiar to us. We're just animals. Mammals."

"Oh, well, I might be the first one here."

"Guess so. Are you a predator or prey?"

"I think both. I eat animals sometimes, but I was also been attacked by animals. Example like those teenage animals did to me. Oh, I'm Agatha Galido, by the way. Just call me Aggie." Aggie puts her arm near Judy's face.