Zootopia (rewritten)

Sloths

Judy parked her mobile in the parking lot, and she, Nick, and Aggie entered the DMV.

"Flash is the fastest guy in there. You need something done, he's on it." Nick explained as the trio walk in to the counter, where some animals are waiting in each of the lines.

"I hope so. We are really fighting the clock and every minute counts." Judy hoped until she saw in front of her eyes, much to her disbelief, "Wait, they're all sloths?"

The DMV's employees are sloths. In the counter, a lioness is waiting for the sloth to stamp her paper, but the sloth just stamp the paper to slow, then moves to the next paper. In another counter, an armadillo waits for the female sloth to staple his paper, but the sloth staples the paper slow. And in another counter, a pig was taking a pictures was taking a picture for her driver license, but the sloth was too slow to push the button. When the pig was too tired to wait, she looks at the sloth if he push the button, which making her miss the shot.

"You said this was gonna be quick!" Judy yelled at Nick.

"What, are you saying that because he's a sloth he can't be fast?" Nick shrugged, "I thought in Zootopia anyone could be anything."

"Hm, I never knew sloths could be... like this." Aggie chuckled as she tries not mentioning the word "slow".

"Well, you should study many different animals more than studying common animals, girl." Nick smiled at Aggie.

"Well, I guess you're right." Aggie shrugged smiley.

Judy, Nick, and Aggie stand in front of the counter, where Nick greeted his sloth friend, "Flash, Flash, hundred yard dash, buddy it's nice to see ya!"

Flash answered slowly, "Nice to... see you... too."

"Hey, Flash, I'd love you to meet my friends..." Nick was about to introduced Judy and Aggie to Flash, bit he forgot their name, as he said to the two girls, "Uh, darlings, I've forgotten your names."

Judy was the one to introduce herself, "Officer Judy Hopps, ZPD" Then she introduced Aggie as Judy points her, "And this is Agatha Galido, a human from another world." And then, Judy greeted Flash, "How are you?"

"I am... doing... just..." Flash replied, but he was cut off.

"Fine?" the bunny guessed.

"As well... as... I can... be." The sloth continued. "What..."

"Hang in there." Nick said to Judy as she glared at him in respond.

Flash continues to ask Judy, "...can I... do..."

"Well, I was hoping you could run a plate..." Judy was cut-off.

"...for you..."

"Well, I was hoping you could..."

"...today?"

Judy froze by the minute to wait for Flash to say another word, but since the sloth finished asking, Judy said pleasingly, "Well, I was hoping you could run a plate for us. We are in a really big hurry."

"Sure... What's the... plate..." Flash asked as he was cut off again.

"2-9-T..." Judy answered, but she was cut off too.

"...number?" Flash continued, asking.

Judy takes a deep breath, and answered the sloth's question, "2-9-T-H-D-0-3."

Flash looks at his touchscreen computer, and tap on it, "2... 9..."

"T-H-D-0-3." Judy said as she rubbed her paws on the counter's table, which she was impatient.

Flash continued tapping his touchscreen computer, "T..."

"H-D-0-3." The bunny's ears are dropped down.

"H..."

"D-0-3."

"D..."

"Mhm, 0. 3."

"0..."

"3!"

"Hey, Flash, wanna hear a joke?" Nick interrupted.

"No!" Judy groaned and glared at Nick.

"Sure." Flash said.

"Oohh, I love jokes!" Aggie rubbed her hands and jumped with excitement.

"What do you call a three-humped camel?" Nick asked, making hand gesture.

"I don't... know..." Flash replied. "What do... you call... A..."

"Three-humped camel..." Judy grunted softly.

"Three-humped... camel?" The sloth continues his question.

"Pregnant!" Nick laughed as he softly punches Judy's shoulder.

"Ha, ha! That's a good one, N-fox!" Aggie laughed, "A camel has two humps on its back, and then third one is its baby! That is funny!"

Flash also laughs, only in a slow movement.

"Yes, very funny, very funny!" Judy smiled, pretend to be laughing, "... Can we please just focus on the task?"

After laughing, Flash turns to his fellow sloth next to him, "Hey..."

"Wait wait wait!" Judy tried to stop Flash from sharing the joke to his fellow sloth.

"Priscilla." Flash called.

"No, no!" Judy shouted.

"Yes... Flash?" Priscilla responded.

Flash shares a joke that Nick told him, but Judy was frustrated, while Aggie continues to laugh so hard like she doesn't want to stop laughing at this moment..

"A three humped camel? Pregnant! Okay! Great! We got it! Please just..." Judy grunted impatiently, and dumps her head on the counter's table.

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When a paper about the plate number 2-9-T-H-D-0-3 was printed, Flash takes the paper very slowly as it tears to separate from the remaining paper in the printer.

"Here... you... go..." Flash gave the paper to Judy, but since he was too slow, Judy hopped to get the paper from Flash's claw.

"Thank you!" Judy thanked Flash, then she reads the paper. "It's registered to... Tundratown Limo Service! A limo took Otterton! And the limo's in Tundratown! It's in Tundratown!" she yelled excitingly as she hops quickly to the door.

"Way to hustle, bud. I love ya! I owe ya!" Nick smiled as he and Aggie follow Judy to the door.

"Hurry! We gotta beat the rush hour and..." Judy looked outside, and was shocked of what she sees that it was dark, the cars on the parking lot, except Judy's mobile are gone, and the streetlights are on, "IT'S NIGHT?!"

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