✨Vampire/Werewolf RESULTS✨

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Here are the most awaited results of TBBA Vampire/Werewolf category!

Congratulations to all the winners! All the best for your future endeavours!

For the participants who didn't win, remember that this is just the start of your wonderful journey as a writer. So don't get disheartened ,pay attention to the review, correct your mistakes and participate again next time! All the best for your future endeavours!

1st place

Her Luna by @Cassiekitten

Character development: 10 / 10
Plot :10 / 10
Cover: 10 / 10
Title and reference :10 / 10
Summary :9 / 10
Beginning :10 / 10
End / development :10 / 10
Creativity and originality :10 / 10
Style and tone :10 / 10
Grammar: 10 / 10
Total : 99 / 100

Review: The cover is beautiful I love it so much. The summary is a bit vague and could have slightly more detail but overall it tells you what you need to know. I do feel sorry for her, I mean she had thoughts of running away and probably still does it's a lot of pressure for anyone. You can plainly see the situation is toxic and draining, but then again it's not her mate so it makes sense. If he won't let anyone near her he is just too insecure. They are too cute together.

2nd place

The Alpha's Unexpected Savior by @Imperfetto_tesoro

Character development 10 / 10
Plot 10 / 10
Cover 10 / 10
Title and reference 10 / 10
Summary 10 / 10
Beginning 9 / 10
End/ development 9 / 10
Creativity and originality 10 / 10
Style and tone 10 / 10
Grammar 10 / 10
Total 98 / 100

Review: I love the tone of the colors on the cover
I must admit this sounds like a hot mess and im glad im not in his shoes as at this point I would have just ran away or something
I like how the author put the characters and descriptions in other chapters so you know what they look like before hand
...interesting way to start it off I guess
Ok it got more exciting but im worried for archer though its minda funny how no words just gonna punch his brother

3rd place

The Rejected Luna by @LyraLunaCalypso

Character development :10 / 10
Plot:10 / 10
Cover :10 / 10
Title and reference :10 / 10
Summary :10 /10
Beginning :10 / 10
End / development: 10 / 10
Style and tone :10 / 10
Creativity and originality :9 /10
Grammar: 9 / 10
Total : 98 / 100

Review: I love the colors and effect of the cover
I already feel sorry for her and I haven't even read the book
There are a few places where commas would be preferable or a different form of the word that fits the tense
I love how over protective her brother is and I can't wait to see who her possible second chance mate would be
I know exactly what she means with her best friend I swear I have come so close to just punching one of my bffs because they just won't shut up


Honourable Mention

Red Haze by @Arising

Character development 10 / 10
Plot 10 / 10
Cover 8 / 10
Title and reference 9 / 10
Summary 10 / 10
Beginning 10 / 10
End / development 10 / 10
Style and tone 10 / 10
Creativity and originality 10 / 10
Grammar 10 / 10
Total 97 / 100

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