The Bright Book Awards [CLOSED]

✨Chicklit RESULTS✨

Here are the most awaited results of TBBA Chicklit category!
Congratulations to all the winners! All the best for your future endeavours!

For the participants who didn't win, remember that this is just the start of your wonderful journey as a writer. So don't get disheartened ,pay attention to the review, correct your mistakes and participate again next time! All the best for your future endeavours!

1st place

Ashes, Ashes by @KB_Champion

Character Development – 10/10
Plot – 10/10
Cover – 9/10
Title and Reference to Genre – 10/10
Summary – 10/10
Beginning – 10/10
End – 10/10
Writing Style – 10/10
Creativity and Originality – 9/10
Grammar – 9/10
Total- 97/100

Review: I absolutely loved reading your story. Honestly, every chapter drew me in more and more and it feels like a manuscript nearly ready to be published. I will definitely continue to follow the progression of the story, as the ten chapters you have published are intriguing and leave me wanting more. Your summary is very professional and covers all of the important aspects of the novel. I think your title is appropriate to the story, and my only critique regarding the cover is that I wish your name was in a different color that didn't fade as much into the background color. Your chapters are the perfect length, and each one leaves the reader wanting to know more and continue learning more about the characters. Your character development is phenomenal - I already feel connected to Lizzie, Peter, and Hannah, and can't wait to learn more about her past with Richard. As far as grammar, there were very few errors and most of them were punctuation issues. One in particular I noticed was in Chapter 10, where one section reads "a few upgrades an a thorough scrubing" instead of "and a thorough scrubbing." All in all, I was very impressed with this story and feel like you have great potential as a writer going forward.

2nd place

The Princess and the American
9
10
8
9
9
9
10
9
10
10
TOTAL: 93/100
I haven't read any story with the familiar content. That's good and your grammar was perfect. You really did a great job. Everything was pretty amazing so I have nothing much to say.

3rd place
Shattered
8
9
10
9
9
8
9
9
8
10
TOTAL: 89/100
I like how Aris and Ava had this connection already in the beginning. I think it's very interesting book and it has many secrets that are reviled throughout the story.

Honorable Mention

The Bad boy Got Out of Wattpad

Character Development – 9/10
Plot – 10/10
Cover – 8/10
Title and Reference to Genre – 9/10
Summary – 8/10
Beginning – 8/10
End – 8/10
Writing Style – 9/10
Creativity and Originality – 10/10
Grammar – 7/10
Total- 86/100

I really enjoyed reading your story! I thought your title was good, clear and to the point of what the story was about. I also thought you did a great job with your summary – the one thing I noticed was that you used two different tenses in it, which was a bit confusing. I would edit it to make it uniform throughout. I looked through all of the covers you've made, and feel like the one you chose is the best from your choices. However, I don't really like the font or how big "The" is...that word isn't the focus of your story, so no need for it to be so large. I think your plot and story is very unique – also, the addition of the book trailer was extremely creative and well done. I liked the character development that you had, and feel like you really made each character understandable in relation to Hazel. I know you said English isn't your primary language so I gave you some grace in terms of grammar. However, I do feel like you need to get the book edited by someone, as the large number of grammatical errors take away from your great plot and the creativity you bring to the Wattpad world. I really enjoyed reading your story!