chapter 1(edited)

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that is Kaori but with this hair, I will explain later

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that is Kaori but with this hair, I will explain later

(in iwagakure)

(Kaori pov)middle of training

"a" I was being kicked in the stomach by Dad "That hurt" "GET UP BRAT" Dad scolded me. I try but I can't, and I fall on the ground again. "enough for today" Dad sigh then he has gone.  'did I make him mad' Then I feel tired and the darkness takes me away.

I feel warm 

I feel a hand

eh........another chakra 

I open my eyes and see a pair of beautiful blue eyes. I was shocked and hid behind a tree, I looked at that person to see what it looked like 'ocean blue eyes & long blonde hair what a beautiful figure for a guy'

 I was shocked and hid behind a tree, I looked at that person to see what it looked like 'ocean blue eyes & long blonde hair what a beautiful figure for a guy'

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"Who are you?" I ask while hiding behind the tree. "hey! don't be scared I will not hurt you hmmm" I stand beside the tree "Look it's not like you think I just walk around then I see you sleep here with a lot of bruises, I know it's rude to ask but what happen to you?" I stay silent "Oh! I'm Deidara" "D...Deidara" "there you are! so, what is your name? hmm" "K..Ka...Kaori. Kaori Akiyama" "hmmmmm"

"Why? Is there something on my face"

"KAO!!"

"eeh...??"

"by now I will start calling you Kao as your nickname, is it okay with you?"

I froze

"We are a friend, right? Every friend had a nickname for their friend, right??"

I laugh loudly but tears fall from my eyes. "are you okay? did I say something wrong?" he was shocked at my action "it's nothing, it's just...my first time someone tells me I'm their friend... I feel happy" I wipe the tears and hug him tightly then whisper "Thank you, Dei-chan" I feel his hand on my back...he hugs me back

(Deidara pov)

I was shocked because she hugged me and called me 'Dei-chan' what this feeling ... it felt so warm. I hugged her back then we talked together. She told me everything, she had a demon that being sealed in her body at first I scare but look at her back, she had tears in her eyes look like even she scared that I might leave her after she told me that. I want to run away that time but my heart says 'this girl is kind and really strong like she will never lose her control' so I decide that I will never run, I hug her again to soothing her.

(Kaori pov)

I really shock that Dei-chan didn't run away from me like others after I tell him about it but most important he hugs me. what this feeling is so warm, I hope we can stay like this then he said "I need to show you something" then he shows me his hand....mouth....he had a mouth on his hand

without the ring okay and no akatsuki cloak

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without the ring okay and no akatsuki cloak. just kid hand)
(Deidara pov)

"SUGOI (mean awesome in Japanese) " "eeh" she looks like a kid when they get candy "you...you...You're not afraid to" "why, did i need to afraid of it" "usually people will scare or call me freak" she holds my big hand in her tiny hand(Kaori is 4 years old and Deidara is 8 years old) "I will never, okay because...." "because...???" "I really think it awesome, tomorrow can we meet here again" "hmm we will"

(author pov)

 After that, they meet everyday and fun time together for 4 years. They share their skills and story with each other. They also keep each other secret. Then something happens.....

[Kaori(8)Deidara(12)]

(Kaori pov)

I just wake up and see an empty room. I start to panic and start to call my dad "DAD!!!!" I start running to the living room and he are packing his cloth "dad what are you doing??where are you going??" "not me but us" "us???where are we going ?? dad...please tell me" my tears fall my big eyes. "we gonna go back to.." "BACK!!WHERE!!WHY!!"I scream cause I scare where, what, why....why now and I already promised him that I will never leave alone. I fall on my knee and cry hard "GET UP WE NEED TO GO KNOW BRAT WE DON'T HAVE MUCH TIME!! GET ON YOUR LEG" dad shout at me angrily. I stand and grab my bag. My dad held my hand and go to the destination.

(Deidara pov)

hmm she never late before....should check her

~~~skip by kiryu zero bite kaname~~~

I just arrive at Akiyama's but all I see is the empty house. I fall on the ground.....she says she will never leave alone. I cry harder while hold on a flower gem

FLASHBACK

"Dei-chan I want to give you something" she put something in my hand

gem....??? flower??

"wow, it so beautiful but why??" "I just want you to remember me every time you see this" I smile "then I also want to give you something too so

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"wow, it so beautiful but why??" "I just want you to remember me every time you see this" I smile "then I also want to give you something too so....give your hand" ( cute bird )

give your hand" ( cute bird )

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"wow so beautiful....i...i like it. Thank you Dei-chan" she hugged me. Of course, I hug her back and we stay like that for a few minutes

END OF FLASHBACK

Kao...Kaori where are you... I thought we will stay together forever....i....i...i love you, Kao....please come back to me....don't worry I will wait for you

(Kaori pov)
'Dei-chan I'm sorry' as I walk through the door to konohagakure (leaf)

(922 words)

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