Irresistible. boyxboy

Hmmm, Update?

Update? After this long? Whoaa! (Hopefully I get some feedback on this.) 

Well I was thinking this would probably be an easier way to get everyone's attention! I was thinking about going through Irresistible and redoing it.

Well not redoing it, mostly making it more detailed and make it make more sense. I guess in a sense it would be redoing it but it will have the same outcome and everything and I will mostly keep their personalities the same, Cedric may be a little bit more serious but he will still have his randomness. You guys seem to like that about him. 

Here's an example of what I want to change: How can Cedric be okay with his father just walking out on them? Hell I wouldn't be okay with it. I wanna do more than just one chapter of him bonding with his father. I think just one scene doesnt make everything A-okay in a father and son relationship. (well not one scene but you know what I mean.) I want a little bit more father and son time. (no matter how boring that may be for you guys)

Another example: I also want something more with Ced and Oli, I feel like it was all too rushed and I Want to take my time. Not super duper slow! But enough to make them groweven more....at the beginning. I feel like it was rushed.  I dunno. 

Also....Sex scenes >.> LOL. Need major fixing! I was young and had no idea...well still kind of have no idea but I have a better idea lol. 

Another reason for me doing this is for me to get back into Ced and Oli <3. So I can eventually finish the sequel. 

I was never really fully satisfied with this story in the end and still am not, I honestly don't know why you guys like it. 

If you guys could tell me your opinions I would love it. :) I can just keep it the same way as it is but if I get enough positive feedback I may just do what I want and fix it up to my liking.  If I dont get any I'll just delete this and forget about it. 

Thanks in advance. 

With love, 

Cupycakes. <3