Onyxmuse Critiques!

A Warm Welcome I'll Ruin with the Annoyance of Terms to be Followed

Hello! Hey! Yo! Moshi Moshi! Or whatever works with you!

So, ahm, I'm here offering my services of critiquing your stories here just for the heck of it. Cause why ever not, there's just so many hidden gems out there out of sight, buried under the catacombs of denial! If you think your baby deserves some love or requires a little bashing to get better, look no further, Onyx is here to do a good job of it.

Whether you found me via the forum thread or through my story, kindly follow this book if you ever want to refer to my services once more and if satisfied, do kindly spread the word 🙆🏻‍♀️

Ahm, so as far as welcomes go, I guess I ought to get into business musn't I?

A few terms and conditions I have to throw in which my fellow wattpadder should be aware of whilst they correspond to me are;

1- I take ALOT of time in critiquing, at best I can do ten chapters and no more people. I have a career to build here and with a demanding hobby like this to keep me sane, I'd be grateful if you'd comply with my delayed and often late responses.

2- Did I mention a limitation in requesting number of chapters to be done? I must have, but I will do so again. 10 chapters per person is the maximum you can get out of me. My service would include the face of the book aka the cover and the synopsis, the prose and the character development along with the progression of the story. I would point out grammatical errors, however I would advise an editor if the trouble is solely of that and nothing else, in which case I would nudge you on that from time to time but won't be a grammar nazi about it. (How nice 😁)

3- It takes a month or two for me to get a novel done at best! Why? Career is priority peeps, I little friendly advice to y'all! Whilst hobbies are great to stir the imagination, it's never good to have your career at stake, especially the line of work you're absolutely passionate about.

4- The Genres I go for? I can do pretty much everything except horror and science fiction. I'd be okay with mature stories but if it's solely based on steamy romance with little to no storyline kindly don't knock on my office, you'd endanger my morals 😂 no kidding, leave some innocence while it can last!

5- If you're interested in discussing about your story with me, you can always hit me up via PM. I promise I don't bite! (Neither can I hold a scalpel right...yet!)

6- I will be honest but I won't be mean about it. Whilst a lot of people may claim that being honest has to come along with being rude, I for one strongly disagree. Being trained in the health care profession where you got to convey the toughest of truths to your patients, being kind and sympathetic is mandatory. There is such a thing as manner of conveyance. You can say a great thing in a lovely, eloquent way or in an offensive manner; the gist would be the same but the impact left wouldn't.

I guess that's all. Let's move on to the forum and where you'd drop your requests in.